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Looks Like my Plot Did a Switch at the Last Minute! (NaNoWriMo) So, who’s going younger than YA?

Friday, October 30, 2009 · Leave a Comment

Well, I’ve been planning an adult story since August, but the past couple of days, it just seems that my plot is going towards a younger reader group. Just this morning it hit me, that maybe my focus is all wrong. I mean what do I read? Books for kids. What do I watch? 80’s Saturday morning cartoons and Disney movies. I collect comic books – not teen comic books – Disney’s Donald Duck and Mickey Mouse comic books. I’ve got nearly every Little Golden Book ever made.

I’m a single woman aged 34, and if you look at my book shelves and DVD collection you’d think I was running a day care! LOL! Than I’ve got this plot I’ve been working on all summer, and it’s just really seems like it’s better suited for 8 to 12 year old readers – or adults like me who read books written for 8 to 12 year old readers.

So I think, it looks like I’ll be writing a kids books this year, and maybe I should focus my efforts on kid’s books more seeing how that’s what I read.

Changing plot at the last minute! I’m trying not to, but mine just changed big time this morning. All summer I’ve been planing Frost Zombies, than this morning the vampire bug hit me and now I want to write a Dracula fanfic instead!!! ACK!

I was planning an adult book, now I’m planning a kids series instead.

????

And there are still 2 days before November 1st.

Find Out More About My 2008 NaNoWriMo Book Which the LDS/Mormon Church is up in arms about. (NOTE – this link goes to the unedited proof of the book and not to the actual listing.)

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Looks Like my Plot Did a Switch at the Last Minute! (NaNoWriMo) So, who’s going younger than YA?

Friday, October 30, 2009 · Leave a Comment

Well, I’ve been planning an adult story since August, but the past couple of days, it just seems that my plot is going towards a younger reader group. Just this morning it hit me, that maybe my focus is all wrong. I mean what do I read? Books for kids. What do I watch? 80’s Saturday morning cartoons and Disney movies. I collect comic books – not teen comic books – Disney’s Donald Duck and Mickey Mouse comic books. I’ve got nearly every Little Golden Book ever made.

I’m a single woman aged 34, and if you look at my book shelves and DVD collection you’d think I was running a day care! LOL! Than I’ve got this plot I’ve been working on all summer, and it’s just really seems like it’s better suited for 8 to 12 year old readers – or adults like me who read books written for 8 to 12 year old readers.

So I think, it looks like I’ll be writing a kids books this year, and maybe I should focus my efforts on kid’s books more seeing how that’s what I read.

Changing plot at the last minute! I’m trying not to, but mine just changed big time this morning. All summer I’ve been planing Frost Zombies, than this morning the vampire bug hit me and now I want to write a Dracula fanfic instead!!! ACK!

I was planning an adult book, now I’m planning a kids series instead.

????

And there are still 2 days before November 1st.

Find Out More About My 2008 NaNoWriMo Book Which the LDS/Mormon Church is up in arms about. (NOTE – this link goes to the unedited proof of the book and not to the actual listing.)

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Thank You Kitty. . .Page copy protected against web site content infringement by Copyscape

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Blingo

Categories: EelKat · NaNoWriMo · NaNovel 2009 · Wendy C. Allen · creative writing · national novel writing month

My NaNoWriMo Plot is Becoming a YA Series????

Friday, October 30, 2009 · Leave a Comment

More and more my plot seems to be leaning towards YA or maybe even pre-teen. It also did a weird change thing that I did not expect. Okay, so I’ve been planning on Jack Frost takes over the world, right? Than I keep thinking that these 3 kids are going to come along and stop him. Great.

Next I think, I want to have another story where Dracula makes his attempt at taking over the world and some how 3 kids stop him.

Than I started thinking, wait, what if these same three kids had this paranormal detective agency as a result of those first 2 stories, and now they are on the look out for all sorts of legendary monsters to defeat.

hhhhhmmmm. . . . .

Is my story spinning off into a series here? YOW! November hasn’t even gotten here yet and I’m already planning spin offs!

Is any one else having this problem? What are you planing to do about it? I’m thinking maybe I should go with it. Maybe I should let my plot spin off into a whole series of shorter pre-teen novels. What do you think? And than if I do, do that, I’ll have to come up with a bunch of legendary monsters for them to fight right? Any ideas on possible other monsters?

Find Out More About My 2008 NaNoWriMo Book Which the LDS/Mormon Church is up in arms about. (NOTE – this link goes to the unedited proof of the book and not to the actual listing.)

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Thank You Kitty. . .Page copy protected against web site content infringement by Copyscape

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Blingo

Categories: Choose-your-own-adventure · EelKat · NaNoWriMo · NaNovel 2009 · Wendy C. Allen · national novel writing month

What Makes a Vampire, a Vampire?

Friday, October 30, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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Okay, so I’ve got my plot all ready to go, spent 3 months outlining, in 2 days I start writing, I’m doing good too, no vampires in sight – ghosts and zombie, but not a single vampire, and suddenly today, October 30th, I start thinking – tomorrow is Halloween! YAY! Got to go watch every Bela Lugosi and Vincent Price movie under the sun for the next 24 hours!!!! Yep, I’m weird, I know – every Halloween I pull out mountains of Bela Lugosi and Vincent Price DVDs and spend the whole day going classic vampire crazy. Oh no! Two days before NaNoWriMo I have a different plot ready to write and than Halloween shows up and messes up my train of thought and now all I can think about is vampires and how much I want to write a vampire story. :(

Okay, so I’m still doing my Frost Zombie apocalypse and I’m planning on 75k for that, but you know me, since when I have written less than 200k for NaNoWriMo? What that means is, I can go ahead and do a second NaNovel, and if I can go ahead and do a second NaNovel, than why can’t I go ahead and spend Halloween planning a vampire NaNovel? Can I outline an entire novel in less than 24 hours? Who knows, but I’m going to try.

So, here’s where I come to you guys. I’m trying to figure out what exactly it is, I think of when I think of vampires. Who are my vampires? What is it that makes my vampires, different from humans? What makes a vampire a vampire?

So, I am compiling a list of classic vampire things, (I prefer classic Bela Lugosi style Dracula vampires, btw, so that’s what I’m focusing on, and if any one has anything they want to add to this list, feel free to jump in and add your thoughts.

Here is my list so far:

Things that make a Vampire a Vampire:

- drinks blood
- is undead
- looks like Bela Lugosi ;)
- dresses like Bela Lugosi =P

“Regular” Vampires have the following abilities:
“Super Powerful” Vampires also have the additional “rare” abilities:

Movement Abilities:

-Inhuman Speed
-Unearthly Reflexes
-Vertical Ascension (climbs walls)
-Gliding (with help of cape)
-Bat Form
-Mist Form
-Flight
-Move Silently

Rare Movement Abilities

-Clown Frenzy
-Astral Projection
-Dodge Daylight
-Spider Climb
-Cat’s Grace
-Shadow Conceal

Offensive Abilities

-Fangs
-Vampiric Claws
-Enhanced Senses
-Animalistic Frenzy
-Superhuman Strength
-Mind Control
-Wolf Form
-Horrific Transformation
-Glamor

Rare Offensive Abilities

-Pyrokinesis
-Corrosion
-Control Mall Santas
-Ironic Annihilation
-Purge Blood
-Pestilence
-Mummification
-Blood Soaked Vengeance (Carrie)
-Hellfire
-Demonic Familiar
-Bloodletting
-Vampire Lord
-Summon Horseman
-Shadow Transformation
-Bone Spikes
-Demon Summoning
-Telepathy
-Drain Youth
-Raise Zombies
-Invisibility
-Shadow Manipulation
-Blood to Ashes
-Command a Wolf Pack
-Command Rat Swarm
-Cause Madness
-Intoxicating Bite

Defensive Abilities

-Fast Healing
-Impervious to bullets
-Intimidation

Rare Defensive Abilities

-Veil of Thorns
-Winged Guard
-Premonition
-Indestructible
-Iron Skin
-Create Illusion
-Immunity to Religious Icons
-Immaterial (can walk through solid walls)
-Resistance to Sunlight
-Immunity to Silver

(This list was copied from the Zanga Game Vampire Wars, btw)

So, what do you think makes a Vampire a Vampire? Are the things on my list enough, too much, or not enough? I’m not really worrying about cliches and such. I figure if it’s too cliche, well tough luck, I’ll just have cliched vampires than. I’ve always been mesmerized by Bela Lugosi as Dracula, he’s the best vampire ever and he’s what I think of when I think of vampires, so he’s what I’ve got stuck in my head right this moment – of course it helps that I just watched Dracula last night too :)

This blog post, btw, started out in life as a NaNoWriMo Thread, What Makes a Vampire, a Vampire? So if you have an answer, you should post your answer on the thread itself. Okay? Cool!

Find Out More About My 2008 NaNoWriMo Book Which the LDS/Mormon Church is up in arms about. (NOTE – this link goes to the unedited proof of the book and not to the actual listing.)

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

———-
Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Thank You Kitty. . .Page copy protected against web site content infringement by Copyscape

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Blingo

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What Makes a Vampire, a Vampire?

Friday, October 30, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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Okay, so I’ve got my plot all ready to go, spent 3 months outlining, in 2 days I start writing, I’m doing good too, no vampires in sight – ghosts and zombie, but not a single vampire, and suddenly today, October 30th, I start thinking – tomorrow is Halloween! YAY! Got to go watch every Bela Lugosi and Vincent Price movie under the sun for the next 24 hours!!!! Yep, I’m weird, I know – every Halloween I pull out mountains of Bela Lugosi and Vincent Price DVDs and spend the whole day going classic vampire crazy. Oh no! Two days before NaNoWriMo I have a different plot ready to write and than Halloween shows up and messes up my train of thought and now all I can think about is vampires and how much I want to write a vampire story. :(

Okay, so I’m still doing my Frost Zombie apocalypse and I’m planning on 75k for that, but you know me, since when I have written less than 200k for NaNoWriMo? What that means is, I can go ahead and do a second NaNovel, and if I can go ahead and do a second NaNovel, than why can’t I go ahead and spend Halloween planning a vampire NaNovel? Can I outline an entire novel in less than 24 hours? Who knows, but I’m going to try.

So, here’s where I come to you guys. I’m trying to figure out what exactly it is, I think of when I think of vampires. Who are my vampires? What is it that makes my vampires, different from humans? What makes a vampire a vampire?

So, I am compiling a list of classic vampire things, (I prefer classic Bela Lugosi style Dracula vampires, btw, so that’s what I’m focusing on, and if any one has anything they want to add to this list, feel free to jump in and add your thoughts.

Here is my list so far:

Things that make a Vampire a Vampire:

- drinks blood
- is undead
- looks like Bela Lugosi ;)
- dresses like Bela Lugosi =P

“Regular” Vampires have the following abilities:
“Super Powerful” Vampires also have the additional “rare” abilities:

Movement Abilities:

-Inhuman Speed
-Unearthly Reflexes
-Vertical Ascension (climbs walls)
-Gliding (with help of cape)
-Bat Form
-Mist Form
-Flight
-Move Silently

Rare Movement Abilities

-Clown Frenzy
-Astral Projection
-Dodge Daylight
-Spider Climb
-Cat’s Grace
-Shadow Conceal

Offensive Abilities

-Fangs
-Vampiric Claws
-Enhanced Senses
-Animalistic Frenzy
-Superhuman Strength
-Mind Control
-Wolf Form
-Horrific Transformation
-Glamor

Rare Offensive Abilities

-Pyrokinesis
-Corrosion
-Control Mall Santas
-Ironic Annihilation
-Purge Blood
-Pestilence
-Mummification
-Blood Soaked Vengeance (Carrie)
-Hellfire
-Demonic Familiar
-Bloodletting
-Vampire Lord
-Summon Horseman
-Shadow Transformation
-Bone Spikes
-Demon Summoning
-Telepathy
-Drain Youth
-Raise Zombies
-Invisibility
-Shadow Manipulation
-Blood to Ashes
-Command a Wolf Pack
-Command Rat Swarm
-Cause Madness
-Intoxicating Bite

Defensive Abilities

-Fast Healing
-Impervious to bullets
-Intimidation

Rare Defensive Abilities

-Veil of Thorns
-Winged Guard
-Premonition
-Indestructible
-Iron Skin
-Create Illusion
-Immunity to Religious Icons
-Immaterial (can walk through solid walls)
-Resistance to Sunlight
-Immunity to Silver

(This list was copied from the Zanga Game Vampire Wars, btw)

So, what do you think makes a Vampire a Vampire? Are the things on my list enough, too much, or not enough? I’m not really worrying about cliches and such. I figure if it’s too cliche, well tough luck, I’ll just have cliched vampires than. I’ve always been mesmerized by Bela Lugosi as Dracula, he’s the best vampire ever and he’s what I think of when I think of vampires, so he’s what I’ve got stuck in my head right this moment – of course it helps that I just watched Dracula last night too :)

And now I’m answering NaNoWriMo Threads about vampires—

RE: Help! I know next to nothing about vampires!

[quote=soaringdragon42]I’ve never read about vampires, nor seen any vampire movies. I know most basic cliche things about them (they suck blood, they’re really strong, sunlight does bad things) but that’s about it. The closest I’ve come to vampires is Terry Pratchett. ;P


Then my MC demands she is one, and the majority of the story is of her being turned into one and how she copes with it.


So! What do I need to know, beyond they’re blood sucking weirdos? How can they be killed? What different kinds of vampires are there? Do they sleep? How? How are people turned into vampires? What’s the fascination with them?




Thank you for your help!
[/quote]

What do I need to know, beyond they’re blood sucking weirdos?

Traditionally, vampires are said to be the undead souls of people who commit suicide. They are too wicked to go to heaven because they took a life, but too good to go to hell because the life they took was their own not someone else’s. So they are condemned to walk the Earth between the living and the dead, not quite alive, but not quite dead. They are very similar to zombies, the main difference being that zombies have no mind of their own and vampires have free will to come and go as they please.

They waste away into nothing if they do not eat human blood. They are farther curse though, by the fact that drinking human blood causes the human to become a vampire as well. This than leads to vampires who do not want to drink blood in some stories.

How can they be killed?

Traditionally they can not be killed, because they are already dead. They can only be warded off and held at bay.

What different kinds of vampires are there?

Every culture has vampire myths, most going back thousands of years. The traditional vampires as we think of them today, comes from the Carpathian myths, and is based on a very real person: Prince Vlad Dracul aka Vlad the Impaler. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vlad_III_the_Impaler who was of course the ruler of Transylvania in the 1400′ and is where Count Dracula myths come from.

Do they sleep? How?

They must sleep in the coffin they were buried in, and carry dirt from their grave with them every where they go. This myth comes from Vlad, because his body vanished from his grave and it is said that he became an undead and took his coffin with him.

How are people turned into vampires?

I think I just explained that.

What’s the fascination with them?

I think every one has a different reason.

[quote=Ghostword]

Important novels:

Dracula by Bram Stoker (the basis for all of them)

I am Legend by Richard Matherson

Salem’s Lot by Stephen King

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YES! I’ll second these. If you only read one vampire novel – let it be Dracula! Practically everything we know about vampires today, came straight out of Dracula. Dracula pretty much created the modern day vampire. Better yet, watch Bela Lugosi’s Dracula. Best vampire movie ever made – even if it was made in 1937. No body embodies the vital essence of being a vampire the way Bela Lugosi did. OMG! That guy was freaking amazing!

Don’t watch the movie version of I Am Legend though. The movie is nothing like the book. Well, yeah, watch it, it is a great movie, but know that in the movie you will not find a single vampire! The book has vampires, the movie does not! When they made the movie they took out the vampires and stuck in zombies instead. That is one book you can not judge by it’s movie.

[quote=Orfn]Try to find a copy of The Lost Boys. It’s an older movie about vampires somewhere between monster and superhuman. If you want straight up monster vampires, watch 30 Days of Night or Salem’s Lot. Twilight or Queen of the Damned are examples of vampires that are hardly even monsters, though I wouldn’t recommend watching Twilight as it would be a good two hours of your life you’ll never get back.[/quote]

The Lost Boys is a great introduction to vampires. It just reaks of every classic vampire cliche, but it does it in such a way that you don’t realize it’s full of cliches. I esp love the twist on the flying vampires, by them riding flying motorcycles. That was pretty cool.

Twilight was a good movie if you watch it with the knowledge that these vampires are really freaky and don’t act like your traditional classic vampire. They are like renegade-I-Don’t-wanna-be-a-vampire type vampires. So it’s a good thing to watch to see how non-traditional vampires could be handled. Just remember it is heavy on the chick-flick so if the thought of watching lovey-dovey romance chick-flick makes you sick, yeah, you might want to avoid it.

Queen of the Damned? I just did not get that movie at all. Vampires? Really? What vampires? Where? I’m not seeing them. The whole movie had me going – What the heck is this thing anyways? I found it incredibly boring and a huge waste of time to watch.

Underworld is another one. It’s like – okay – I’m ready for the vampires to show up now. Where are they? Heeellloooooo? Where are these so called vampires that are supposed to be everywhere? Underworld is not recommended if you have never seen any other vampire movie, because basically, all it is is a bunch of mega wealthy emo dudes and emo chicks fighting werewolves. They don’t do anything other than dress like vampires. And really, you got to do more than live in a big house and wear skin tight emo goth leather, to call yourself a vampire!

[quote=jessica_marie]30 Days of Night is terrifying. Best Vampires as monsters movie I’ve seen.

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wait – What? Those were vampires????????????????????? I thought they were zombies??? Really? Yow! I’ll have to watch it again. I really thought they were zombies. LOL! Yeah – VERY monster in that one. I guess they could have been vampires. I just watched it thinking these are great zombies! Oh well. Actually, I watched it looking for the Bruce Campbell cameo that was supposed to be in it, but wasn’t in it, and I didn’t realize that his cameo was cut until after I watched it 3 times trying to figure out where the hell he was in it! LOL!

This blog post, btw, started out in life as a NaNoWriMo Thread, What Makes a Vampire, a Vampire? So if you have an answer, you should post your answer on the thread itself. Okay? Cool!

Find Out More About My 2008 NaNoWriMo Book Which the LDS/Mormon Church is up in arms about. (NOTE – this link goes to the unedited proof of the book and not to the actual listing.)

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

———-
Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Thank You Kitty. . .Page copy protected against web site content infringement by Copyscape

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Blingo

Categories: Bela Lugosi · Dracula · EelKat · NaNoWriMo · NaNovel 2009 · Vincent Price · Wendy C. Allen · advice for writers · halloween · horror · national novel writing month · vampires · writing horror

Eleven Days Til NaNoWriMo and Stroke Update

Wednesday, October 21, 2009 · 2 Comments

Was just reading: Eleven more days! a post by Chris Baty, boy do I hope I’m feeling better before the start date. I went to the first meeting today – well, it was the second meeting of the year, but I missed the first one cause Google Calendar screwed up the dates. My attendance to the meetings, may prove difficult this year, after what happened Sunday, however, I am determined not to let this thing stop me. I can’t – not in November – the death toll over the past 30 years is more than 2 dozen, all died in November, than 7 years ago, my November wedding was canceled by church leaders who refused to allow us to marry.  I joined NaNoWriMo the following year. It is the only thing that can take my mind off the fact that November is such a terrible mess of hellish memories for me. I can’t not, do NaNoWriMo, I’d go out of my mind if I had to push threw November on my own with nothing to occupy my time.
I had a stroke on Sunday night/Monday morning (not sure the exact time seeing how I blacked out and did not wake up until 9 AM Monday morning.) It seems the 30 years of harassment and the 9 year stretch of steady non-ending stress the vandals, death threats, paint ball attacks, the flood from cut water pipes, the house being set fire to, the pet food recall of 2007 killing off most of my cats overnight, the 75 hens slaughtered and left hanging in my rose bushes, the stretch of homelessness and living through 2 blizzards under a tarp, the exorcism attempts by fanatics who say I’m demon possessed, the excommunication, and not once a break between one event ending and the next one starting, finally caught up with me and my body has simply shut down and is refusing to allow me to move let alone do any thing. I am supposed to be staying in bed around the clock and not getting up at all, but, a farmer living alone who has to constantly fight off vandals and harassment, does not have that option. So, I try to get all the barn chores done and pretty much do nothing else at all.
I have not been writing, I have not been sewing, I’ve not been able to keep up with my mod duties as a Squidoo Angel, I just can’t do anything at all, my body is completely refusing to respond. The only writing I’ve done all week, is these blog posts to keep you updated on my health, and I’m having a really hard time doing them. I’ve not been eating either. I can’t cook, I can’t stand up long enough to cook anything. I can’t walk to the food pantry (homeless shelter) , it’s too far away. I’ve pretty much been living on tea, hot chocolate, pickles, and soda since Sunday, because I can get them without cooking or standing over the stove. My ability to stand is limited, as is my ability to walk. The dizziness has not gone away yet, nor has the lightheartedness - for three days now, everything has just been spinning around me.
Years ago, I used to have problems walking – one of my legs used to cramp up something fierce, as a result I ended up making and leaning to use a quarter staff (a big stick about 5 feet tall – used by warriors to crack open the enemy’s skull – and also served as a sturdy walking stick.) when I was about 14 years old. I do not have it any more – it was one of the things stolen the day the vandals broke in and took a sledge hammer to everything I owned in April 2007. What they did not steal, they smashed. :(
Anyways, today I went out into what is left of the woods (they’ve been cutting trees down all week) and found me a limb to make another quarter staff out of. I find I can walk around more or less okay if I lean my weight on it, so that helps some. At least it allows me to make it to the barn, across the steep rocky cliff hill and the narrow brook, that is between the tent/tarp and the barn. So that solves the problem of getting up and down the hill at least.
I did make it too the NaNoWriMo meeting this morning – without the staff – I made the staff this after noon after the meeting. I’m supposed to be taking aspirin, to keep my blood thin, because this was a mini-pre-stroke which happens before a major big stroke and I need to thin my blood to prevent a full on stroke, but no money + no insurance = no way to get any aspirin. I can’t use Alieve – it’s owned by Proctor and Gamble. I can’t take Teylenol, cause I can’t stop vomiting every time I do take it – guess I’m allergic to it or something. I can take Children’s Teylenol, except I don’t have any and no way to get any either. But hey – who cares about the homeless woman right? All she’s good for is to shoot paint balls at after all. I did, eventually find some Advil, not sure how old they are, but I took 3 of them before going to the meeting and they seemed to work – at least they blocked out the pain long enough so I could walk into the library and sit down, and I was able to be there for the NaNoWriMo meeting at least. Of course, they wore off a few hours later. There are meeting once a week between now and December – I figure if I don’t use any of the Advil the rest of the week/month, and take them before each meeting, I should have enough to last until December, so at least I’ll be able to attend the NaNoWriMo Writ-Ins this year. Hopefully.
I don’t know – they say, mild stroke side effects like mine (movement, loss of balance, etc) usually go away with time as the muscles regain their strength (though the memory loss problem is more likely to be permanent.) and that I should look forward to walking about normally again, so long as I keep my blood thinned, stress at bay, and get bed rest. :( :(
No access to aspirin, so I can’t keep my blood thin.
It’s highly unlikely that the church members, church leaders, or my domineering relatives are going to suddenly find it in their hearts to be anything less than cruel, so the stress isn’t likely to leave either. The constant emails telling me I’m going to hell for committing the sin of being a female over 16 years of age and not yet married – especially at this time of the year on what would have been the anniversary of my wedding had church leaders not stepped in, really doesn’t help my stress levels any either – in fact those constant chiding hurt worse than the paint balls did. Their emails have gotten worse of late seeing how I now have a couple of cousins who are younger than me and as of this year are now grandmothers. They’ve been pumping up that fact heavy the past few months.
No husband. No family. No friends. I’m a farmer. I can’t not take care of the animals. I can let the garden go. The animals need care every single day. No husband. No family. No friends. No help. No bed rest.
I don’t think my hopes of recovery are looking too bright right now. All I really have to look forward too right now is NaNoWriMo, and hope I can keep myself alive, long enough to get For Fear of Little Men out of it’s uncorrected proof formate.
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Still Planning on Doing NaNoWriMo this year in spite of recent health issues

Wednesday, October 21, 2009 · 1 Comment

Some one asked me today if my recent health issues will be stopping me from doing NaNoWriMo this year. Well, I certainly hope not. Yes, I am still planning on doing the contest, though my new found coordination difficulties could slow me down some and hamper my normal speed of typing, thus affecting my overall monthly word count. I don’t know if this is something that will go away over time or not. All I can do is wait and see, I guess. And avoid stairs like the plague. My blurry vision seems to have gone back to normal today, thankfully that did not last. Hopefully this memory lapse thing will be short term too, because it really is getting in the way on my life – having to retrace my steps over and over again, before I ca remember what I was doing, really is taking up way too much time, and I worry that I may do a similar thing with my writing during the contest (writing the same thing several days in a row, without remembering I had already written it the day before).
This has however created a serious problem with my doing the farm work. Our land had several steep hills on it, involving the climbing of craggy ledge, and a narrow bridge across a brook, to get from the street to the barns/gardens. Tonight I discovered two problems -
1.) the narrow bridge, which is very old and over the years the foundation has washed out causing it to lean drastically. The bridge has no railings, and with it’s steep tilt caused by erosion, and my new lack of coordination – I am having a difficult time getting across it without falling off it.
2.) the steep rock/ledge/cliff/hill pathway is the only way to get down to the bridge. There is no real path, just years of knowing which rocks to step on when and how to hold your body in balance as you move your way from top to bottom or bottom to top. The problem is without coordination, I can get neither balance nor a sure footing.
I am really hoping this loss of balance when walking, is not a permanent thing, because it really is making farm work very difficult for me and being alone, I have no one to help me to do any of it.
Problem #3 = without my ability to stay balanced while walking, I can no longer carry the 50lb bags of grain from the feed store to the car, let alone carry them across the yard, down the rocky hill, across the narrow bridge, and to the grain bins at the barn. Nor can I carry the 40lbs of catfood I need per week, from the store to the car from the car to the house to feed my 19 cats.
I have to carry two 50lb bags of grain and two 20lb bags of catfood across that path each and every week. I do not have anyone to help me do this. No friends. No family. (Thanks to 30 years of church members spreading ugly lies and rumors about me being a demon possessed witch.) I don’t know how I will get the bags across the year. I think I can get help from the store to carry them to the car, but once back home what do I do? I guess I’ll have to open the bags and carry the feed over in buckets a little bit at a time. But that much feed – it’ll take hours and dozens of trips up and down that hill and across that bridge. :( I don’t know what to do.
As you can see, continuing on with my NaNoWriMo plans is the least of my worries right now. Yes, I do still plan to do it, but I’ll have to work it in around my working ways around my new found health problems.
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Health UPDATE – Stroke caused by panic attack triggered by LDS Church excommunication threats :(

Tuesday, October 20, 2009 · 1 Comment

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Not really that much better today. I seem to be suffering from a lack of coordination causing me to have difficulty walking. I can not go up or down stairs without falling down. My short term memory has all but disappeared – I went to the kitchen about 20 times tonight before I remembered that I went out there to cook tea. I went down to the road 3 times before I remembered I was down there to get the mail. It’s been very difficult today, I’ve been retracing my movements all day because by the time I get where I was going I have no idea why I went there. It’s extraordinarily frustrating. The frustration compounded by the fact that I can’t seem to move fast at all, and have spent most of my time while walking – trying to brace myself from falling over.
The consensus seems to be that I had a stroke, caused by a lack of oxygen to the brain, triggered by the mass panic attack caused by the excommunication hearing Sunday. :( Wonderful – yet another way the church harassment has damaged my health.
Since the stroke was triggered by the church leaders’ constant harassment – does that mean I now have grounds to take the LDS Church head on in court?
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MONDAY, OCTOBER 19, 2009

Excommunication for publishing my 2008 NaNoWriMo Book – Update

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This post was in reply to a NaNoWriMo forum thread. (Some local “Bible Thumpers”, knowing I was planning to attend the local NaNoWriMo write-its, crashed the writers meeting on October 14, 2009. ) This was my response to the NaNoWriMo thread about it.
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so sorry! I did not see this until just now – I had the Google calendar dates written down – which had the first meeting listed as the 21st. :( Dang – I wasn’t doing anything on the 14th either – I could have gone. Oh well – now I know. Will go change the dates on my calendar.
Bible thumpers! YIKES! Probably someone I know too – I try to duck away from them – the whole excommunication thing has got some of them really pissed off at me the past few months. :( It’s no secret that I’m not adhering to church rules as much as they’d like. (I’m about on the farthest end from Bible thumping as you can get.) I’m being excommunicated from my church because I published my 2008 NaNovel – I had posted the first draft of it online on my blog last December, and my bishop got a hold of it and did a total flip out . The church leaders have been on my back about it all summer. :( :( :(
I was supposed to go to an excommunication hearing (it’s like a court with judges and witnesses and everything) this morning, but I was so stressed out about it that I ending up having a major panic attack and locked myself in my room instead. I’ve been going to the other meetings with the bishop and the other church leaders (some came in from out of state) and each one their accusation just get worse and worse and they never give me a chance to say anything in my own defense. Their latest accusation is to call me a witch consorting with demons! OMG! You could have floored me with THAT one! I mean, come on, what century are they living in here?
They’ve been pretty much holding back on the excommunication – in hopes that I would give in a not publish the book, but 3 days ago – I announced on my blog that I had received the proof copy and the sample cover art and had a preview of what the online catalog listing would look like – and I posted a copy of the info as well.
I guess my bishop watches my blog, because last night his counselor called me and told me I had to come in this morning and that they had brought in the State President (he’s the guy who would than send the papers to the Prophet in Utah – who would in turn send Salt Lake Leaders here to Maine for the final hearing.)
Well, I called my high priest, and he is stunned – he says he can’t figure out why or how my book got them so upset or why they are freaking out like this over it. He also said that with an excommunication proceeding, it doesn’t matter what I say, they’ll excommunicate whether I go or not, and that since my health is not really that good and stress makes it worse, he suggested that from now on I just ignore them and not go to any of the meetings, because there is no reason for me to put myself through the stress of sitting through all these hearings and listening to them belittle me. Well, I’ve been taking his advice for 22 years now and he’s never steered me wrong before (and he was a priest many years before the Bishop was even born, so he actually knows the church laws better.)
So, I took his advice and didn’t go to the hearing this morning, but than they called both my mom, and my dad and my 3 brothers and my step dad in, I guess because I didn’t show up, and from what they (my family) tell me, they got interrogated up one side and down the other. I guess the Stake President is really pissed that he came all the way down here and I didn’t show up. Well, after they called my family in, I was here alone at the house and I did a total meltdown wipe out panic attack – only thing I could think to do was to call my high priest and he came down from Wells and spent the day with me until I was calmed down enough to be left alone again. He’s really pissed off at the fact that they are getting me upset like this.
And I know I’m rambling – sorry – I didn’t mean to unload all my problems like that, but this whole thing just happened about 2 hours ago and I haven’t quite calmed down yet – my heart rate is just through the roof right now. I’m drinking tea and trying to relax and trying to think about plotting my NaNovel and worrying that they’ll get freaked out over the one I’m writing this year – it’s really getting in the way of my planning, actually. I gotta just keep telling myself to breeeeeeaaaath and relax and try to think happy thoughts – like plotting my NaNovel. I tried going to sleep, but I started having nightmares about the bishop and I can’t go for a walk because the snow is really coming down right now, so I’m here on the forums instead and hoping that I can find something here to take my mind off of this, but uhm… this post kind of tells me that that isn’t working either. So sorry for interrupting your thread.

MONDAY, OCTOBER 19, 2009

HELP! Any doctors out there? Medical advice?

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I know the first answer is going to be “Go to the hospital.” but before you say that, I’ve tried going to the hospital many times in the past. The receptionist starts filling out my info – asks what type of insurance I have – I tell her I don’t have and can’t get any. (the links tells you why in more detail, I posted about this before.) As soon as they hear that, they stop filling out my forms and tell me to leave, saying they are not allowed to treat any one without medical insurance. :( :( :( I have not seen a doctor since I was 17 years old. The moment I turned 18, I was too old for insurance and was never eligible to get any from anywhere.
That said, I don’t know exactly what is wrong. I’ve never really had anything like this happen before, so I don’t know what is wrong or what to do about it. If you read my last post, you’ll know more about the events of this morning which, I’m assuming led up to this, and I’m also assuming that what is wrong is directly caused byan inordinate amount of stress, the past few years, which has been building up for the past few months.
My symptoms:
First off, my stomach (belly? gut? intestine? that basic area) feels like a giant wearing cleats is jumping on me. Lots of stabbing sharp pains in lots pf places, but all in the same basic area. They really, really hurt, really, really, bad. It’s like menstrual cramps only lots of them and magnified 100 times more painful. I can not stand up, I can barely sit up long enough to type this. My lower back is also aching, which I think may be a side effect of these stabbing pains.
Secondly, as mentioned in my last post - my heart is racing – it feels like it is just going faster and faster and faster – like someone put it into overdrive and it is stuck there and can’t slow down, it can only beat faster. It feels like my heart has multiplied and there are now hundreds of tiny hearts all over me – in my lungs, my head, my ears, my neck, my arms – I guess that must be a throbbing caused by my blood trying to speed up fast enough to match my heart rate? That’s the only thing I can thinks of that it must be.
My lungs feel, i don’t know – weird – it’s really hard to breath, like someone reached in and is squeezing them so I can’t breath. I don’t know how else to describe it.
My head is pounding – it feels like there are sledge hammers all around me – pounding me from all sides. It hurts an awful lot. I’ve never had a headache that felt like this before. It’s a very scary feeling.
I am very, very, very, very dizzy – my head feels like a balloon, like it’s not there – like it filled with helium and floated away – a very light headed feeling – I do not think I could stand up or walk right now with out falling over. This seems to be spreading – my arms feel like they are going numb, making it hard for me to type this. It’s a very weird and scary sensation, because it is like I am losing control over my body.
I don’t know what to do. I know I should go to the hospital, but I can’t because I don’t have insurance. I don’t have a doctor I can call either, because of the same reason. Please help. If any one knows what I can do to stop this pian, please let me know. Thank you.
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I must have passed out – I don’t remember falling asleep. :( Just woke up and I’m wicked dizzy – but I don’t hurt as much as I did last night. That was about 4 AM and it’s now 9:30 AM. Just looked in the mirror – all my color is gone – I’m whiter than white. Not sure what caused that????? I’ve got a weird chill now – my whole body feels like I’m burning up (I must have a really high fever or something) but I’m freezing cold at the same time – I can’t stop shivering. My right side hurts – like my right ovary is throbbing – in that area – do ovaries throb? I’m not good with biology – I don’t know what else is in that area. 


I’m so dizzy right now – everything is like it’s all spinning around me. I walked to the bathroom and back, but I felt top heavy, like I was gonna fall over – had to hold on to the wall to walk. My head is throbbing and my eyes hurt – everything is blurry, more so than usual – that’s not good, I’m also blind as it is – I can barely see 8 inches in front of me on a good day. :( I feel really strange – like I’m not attached to my body, or something, I don’t know how else to describe it, it’s just a really weird sensation. I think I need to lay down. I can’t stop shivering – I’m going to go make a hot-water-bottle and than go to bed.

It’s times like this, I wish I had a husband to take care of me. I really hate being alone. Even if I just had a friend I could talk to, would be nice. Church members and their superstitious crazed hysterics saw to that. Twenty years of being shunned. It makes life really hard when no one will look at you let alone talk to you. :( In a few weeks it should have been my 7th anniversary. Church leaders put a stop to the wedding. November is a really bad month for me – most every death in my life happened in November. The wedding that got canceled was supposed to be in November. Maybe that’s why I throw myself into NaNoWriMo with such a driving force – to try to forget. :(

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HELP! Any doctors out there? Medical advice?

Monday, October 19, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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I know the first answer is going to be “Go to the hospital.” but before you say that, I’ve tried going to the hospital many times in the past. The receptionist starts filling out my info – asks what type of insurance I have – I tell her I don’t have and can’t get any. (the links tells you why in more detail, I posted about this before.) As soon as they hear that, they stop filling out my forms and tell me to leave, saying they are not allowed to treat any one without medical insurance. :( :( :( I have not seen a doctor since I was 17 years old. The moment I turned 18, I was too old for insurance and was never eligible to get any from anywhere.

That said, I don’t know exactly what is wrong. I’ve never really had anything like this happen before, so I don’t know what is wrong or what to do about it. If you read my last post, you’ll know more about the events of this morning which, I’m assuming led up to this, and I’m also assuming that what is wrong is directly caused by an inordinate amount of stress, the past few years, which has been building up for the past few months.

My symptoms:

First off, my stomach (belly? gut? intestine? that basic area) feels like a giant wearing cleats is jumping on me. Lots of stabbing sharp pains in lots pf places, but all in the same basic area. They really, really hurt, really, really, bad. It’s like menstrual cramps only lots of them and magnified 100 times more painful. I can not stand up, I can barely sit up long enough to type this. My lower back is also aching, which I think may be a side effect of these stabbing pains.

Secondly, as mentioned in my last post - my heart is racing – it feels like it is just going faster and faster and faster – like someone put it into overdrive and it is stuck there and can’t slow down, it can only beat faster. It feels like my heart has multiplied and there are now hundreds of tiny hearts all over me – in my lungs, my head, my ears, my neck, my arms – I guess that must be a throbbing caused by my blood trying to speed up fast enough to match my heart rate? That’s the only thing I can thinks of that it must be.

My lungs feel, i don’t know – weird – it’s really hard to breath, like someone reached in and is squeezing them so I can’t breath. I don’t know how else to describe it.

My head is pounding – it feels like there are sledge hammers all around me – pounding me from all sides. It hurts an awful lot. I’ve never had a headache that felt like this before. It’s a very scary feeling.

I am very, very, very, very dizzy – my head feels like a balloon, like it’s not there – like it filled with helium and floated away – a very light headed feeling – I do not think I could stand up or walk right now with out falling over. This seems to be spreading – my arms feel like they are going numb, making it hard for me to type this. It’s a very weird and scary sensation, because it is like I am losing control over my body.

I don’t know what to do. I know I should go to the hospital, but I can’t because I don’t have insurance. I don’t have a doctor I can call either, because of the same reason. Please help. If any one knows what I can do to stop this pian, please let me know. Thank you.

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I must have passed out – I don’t remember falling asleep. :( Just woke up and I’m wicked dizzy – but I don’t hurt as much as I did last night. That was about 4 AM and it’s now 9:30 AM. Just looked in the mirror – all my color is gone – I’m whiter than white. Not sure what caused that????? I’ve got a weird chill now – my whole body feels like I’m burning up (I must have a really high fever or something) but I’m freezing cold at the same time – I can’t stop shivering. My right side hurts – like my right ovary is throbbing – in that area – do ovaries throb? I’m not good with biology – I don’t know what else is in that area.


I’m so dizzy right now – everything is like it’s all spinning around me. I walked to the bathroom and back, but I felt top heavy, like I was gonna fall over – had to hold on to the wall to walk. My head is throbbing and my eyes hurt – everything is blurry, more so than usual – that’s not good, I’m also blind as it is – I can barely see 8 inches in front of me on a good day. :( I feel really strange – like I’m not attached to my body, or something, I don’t know how else to describe it, it’s just a really weird sensation. I think I need to lay down. I can’t stop shivering – I’m going to go make a hot-water-bottle and than go to bed.

It’s times like this, I wish I had a husband to take care of me. I really hate being alone. Even if I just had a friend I could talk to, would be nice. Church members and their superstitious crazed hysterics saw to that. Twenty years of being shunned. It makes life really hard when no one will look at you let alone talk to you. :( In a few weeks it should have been my 7th anniversary. Church leaders put a stop to the wedding. November is a really bad month for me – most every death in my life happened in November. The wedding that got canceled was supposed to be in November. Maybe that’s why I throw myself into NaNoWriMo with such a driving force – to try to forget. :(
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Excommunication for publishing my 2008 NaNoWriMo Book – Update

Sunday, October 18, 2009 · 2 Comments

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This post was in reply to a NaNoWriMo forum thread.

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so sorry! I did not see this until just now – I had the Google calendar dates written down – which had the first meeting listed as the 21st. :( Dang – I wasn’t doing anything on the 14th either – I could have gone. Oh well – now I know. Will go change the dates on my calendar.

Bible thumpers! YIKES! Probably someone I know too – I try to duck away from them – the whole excommunication thing has got some of them really pissed off at me the past few months. :( It’s no secret that I’m not adhering to church rules as much as they’d like. (I’m about on the farthest end from Bible thumping as you can get.) I’m being excommunicated from my church because I published my 2008 NaNovel – I had posted the first draft of it online on my blog last December, and my bishop got a hold of it and did a total flip out . The church leaders have been on my back about it all summer. :( :( :(

I was supposed to go to an excommunication hearing (it’s like a court with judges and witnesses and everything) this morning, but I was so stressed out about it that I ending up having a major panic attack and locked myself in my room instead. I’ve been going to the other meetings with the bishop and the other church leaders (some came in from out of state) and each one their accusation just get worse and worse and they never give me a chance to say anything in my own defense. Their latest accusation is to call me a witch consorting with demons! OMG! You could have floored me with THAT one! I mean, come on, what century are they living in here?

They’ve been pretty much holding back on the excommunication – in hopes that I would give in a not publish the book, but 3 days ago – I announced on my blog that I had received the proof copy and the sample cover art and had a preview of what the online catalog listing would look like – and I posted a copy of the info as well.

I guess my bishop watches my blog, because last night his counselor called me and told me I had to come in this morning and that they had brought in the State President (he’s the guy who would than send the papers to the Prophet in Utah – who would in turn send Salt Lake Leaders here to Maine for the final hearing.)

Well, I called my high priest, and he is stunned – he says he can’t figure out why or how my book got them so upset or why they are freaking out like this over it. He also said that with an excommunication proceeding, it doesn’t matter what I say, they’ll excommunicate whether I go or not, and that since my health is not really that good and stress makes it worse, he suggested that from now on I just ignore them and not go to any of the meetings, because there is no reason for me to put myself through the stress of sitting through all these hearings and listening to them belittle me. Well, I’ve been taking his advice for 22 years now and he’s never steered me wrong before (and he was a priest many years before the Bishop was even born, so he actually knows the church laws better.)

So, I took his advice and didn’t go to the hearing this morning, but than they called both my mom, and my dad and my 3 brothers and my step dad in, I guess because I didn’t show up, and from what they (my family) tell me, they got interrogated up one side and down the other. I guess the Stake President is really pissed that he came all the way down here and I didn’t show up. Well, after they called my family in, I was here alone at the house and I did a total meltdown wipe out panic attack – only thing I could think to do was to call my high priest and he came down from Wells and spent the day with me until I was calmed down enough to be left alone again. He’s really pissed off at the fact that they are getting me upset like this.

And I know I’m rambling – sorry – I didn’t mean to unload all my problems like that, but this whole thing just happened about 2 hours ago and I haven’t quite calmed down yet – my heart rate is just through the roof right now. I’m drinking tea and trying to relax and trying to think about plotting my NaNovel and worrying that they’ll get freaked out over the one I’m writing this year – it’s really getting in the way of my planning, actually. I gotta just keep telling myself to breeeeeeaaaath and relax and try to think happy thoughts – like plotting my NaNovel. I tried going to sleep, but I started having nightmares about the bishop and I can’t go for a walk because the snow is really coming down right now, so I’m here on the forums instead and hoping that I can find something here to take my mind off of this, but uhm… this post kind of tells me that that isn’t working either. So sorry for interrupting your thread.

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For Fear of Little Men – My NaNoWriMo 2008 Book Publication Preview! (actual release date now just days away!)

Sunday, October 18, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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For Fear of Little Men

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In 1979 two children were startled to see what they described to adults as a small white monkey, sitting in the tree. What was strange about this was that the sighting occurred in the far north of New England, in a pine forest in Maine. Odder still was the children’s insistence that the “monkey” could talk and had asked the children to follow him into the forest.

At first adults were quick to dismiss the sighting as nothing more than over active imaginations, but when more sightings followed they started to pay attention. As the years passed church leaders would take it upon themselves to use violent and shocking measures to keep the girl quiet about what she had seen.

Today, thirty years after the original sighting of the white monkey, the girl, now the woman known to many simply as EelKat the homeless Crazy Cat Woman of Maine, has agreed to be interviewed to tell the story, of the ever illusive white monkey of Maine, and the years of hell that followed at the hands of religious fanatics.

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Categories: EelKat · Etiole · For Fear of Little Men · Maine · NaNoWriMo · The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints · UFOs · Wendy C. Allen · alien abduction · homelessness

The Return of Mr. Ian Woon (A NaNoWriMo Post)

Saturday, October 17, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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The Return of Mr. Ian Woon

I have no idea who Mr. Ian Woon will actually “be” in my NaNovel this year, but I created a NaNoDare to help me figure that out. I think I am going to try using him as a random slapstick character this year. Here is my Mr Ian Woon dare if anyone else wants to have a go at it:

DARE: 
Boost your word count with Mr. Ian Woon.

Bonus Points: 
If Mr. Ian Woon randomly walks in at least once per chapter.

Double Bonus Points: 
If Mr. Ian Woon dies every time he shows up.

Triple Bonus Points: 
If your evil villain is always the one who kills Mr. Ian Woon.

Quadruple Bonus Points: 
If no one but the villain notices that Mr. Ian Woon won’t stay dead.

Homemade Cookies: 
If your villain becomes obsessed with finding a way to kill Mr. Ian Woon permanently.

An Ice Cream Sundae with Cherry on Top: 
If in spite of how many times he has been killed off, Mr. Ian Woon is still alive by the last page.

Mile-High Cheesecake: 
If in spite of how many times he has been killed off, Mr. Ian Woon is the ONLY character left alive by the last page.

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NOTE for those who don’t know who Mr. Ian Woon is:



For those who don’t know who Mr. Ian Woon is, he is the official NaNoWriMo character. (That guy who runs by with the giant pencil.) His name is NaNoWriMo rearranged. For nearly as long as NaNoWriMo has been, it has been the tradition of NaNovelists to write Mr. Ian Woon into a cameo appearance at some point in the NaNovel. He is not the only NaNo character. You can also create other NaNoCharacters by rearranging the letters in NaNoWriMo and to see what you get.

In addition to Mr. Ian Woon, other characters, businesses, food stuffs, etc, that have been used in the past have included: Warm Onion Record Company, Naomi Worn, Omar Ninow, Naomi Rown, Rowan I. Nom, Norina Mow, warm onion soup, Ironwoman, Ian Monrow, Mona Rowin, Mr. Ian O. Won, and many other anagrams.

To find out how others will be using him this year, please see The Official Mr. Ian Woon Thread of 2009.

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Categories: EelKat · Mr Ian Woon · NaNoWriMo · NaNovel 2009 · The Dare Thread · Wendy C. Allen · national novel writing month

I need a *Magic System*

Thursday, October 15, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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I should write up some sort of *magic system* so I know what magic can and can not do in my universe? I don’t want the answer to always be that magic can solve everything – there’s no real challenge for my characters if I did that. More like magic is there, and people who know how (have learned/studied) can use it to varying degrees, but most people just don’t know how to do anything with it – so it’s like, only a few “magical person’s” really know how to use it – Jack Frost for example – only Jack Frost has gone power crazy with it and is using it to freeze everything, sort of just because he can and no one knows how to stop him – which he sees as making him the most powerful person alive.

I still haven’t worked out how Jack goes from ordinary magical person who creates winter, to megalomaniac magical person gone mad. Or who it is that is going to step in to stop him, or how. It seems like it should be another *magical type* but than again, it might be better if a regular, non-magical type stops him – possibly using some sort of weird ice-melting steampunk gadget? Not sure yet.

My world has to different races: Humans and Magical Beings/Elementals (which are sort of like the ancient *gods* or immortals- heavily influenced by Norse mythology, at this point.)

My Humans *can* become magical in a Jedi Knight sort of way, but are unlikely to do so as it’s an ancient nearly dead art.

My Magical Beings rarely associate with the Humans, live among themselves, and are controlling the weather/seasons anonymously, so the Humans pretty much are unaware that without the Elementals, the climate and weather would go all to hell. (Which is just what is going to happen – Jack Frost is going to take over and the rest of the elementals are for whatever reason not going to stop him – maybe they go on strike because the Humans forgot about them?)

I’ve divided my magic system by seasons and elements as a result: Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, Frost/Wind/Snow, Rain/Water/Fog, Green/Plants, Fire, etc.

In any case, I definitely need to build up laws for my magic system, I forgot to do that.

I need to answer the following questions:

What IS magic?

Magic is the ability to do ordinary things by extraordinary means.
It is also the ability to do seemingly miraculous or otherwise impossible things, using methods that deify explanation.

What can magic do?

Magic can help or harm. It can be used for good or evil.

Magic can alter the state of things -

In Humans this means strength of will power – think Jedi Knight – using the force around you not grab a wand and shoot (Harry Potter style).

In Magical Beings this means and Frost Being can enhance the wind to make it colder to the point of turning water into solid ice instantly, or freezing a person solid, etc. and a Green Being could cause plants to grow faster or cause vines to wrap around a person to tie them up, while a Fire Being could make wood burn by touching it. That sort of thing.

What can magic NOT do?

Magic is not the answer to all life’s problems. You can not just snap your fingers and toys march themselves to the toy box. Magic is limited. Magic is not all powerful. Magic does not defy the laws of physics – it can seem like it is doing so, but it’s only making it look that way.

Magic can not turn something into something else – a person into a newt, a copper teacup into a gold brick, etc.

Who can learn magic?

There are two types of magic in this universe:

1.) The type mentioned above, which is a flow of energy throughout the world that every one has access to, but almost no one knows or believes they do. These are ordinary Humans, not unlike us. They are not born with “mutant powers*. Some of them are just more spiritual or psychic than others. They have the same physical limitations as us. They can not do *Harry Potter* magic. These that do harness the magic energy do so in much the same way Jesus did.

2.) Magical beings and immortals are born with *magical gifts*, which they can either choose to develop and use or not. Due to their species they are born with *special powers*. They are a race of *super beings*, somewhat akin to super heroes and super villains from comic book universes. Their powers are in controlling elements of nature – the weather, for example. They are thus referred to as Elementals.

These elemental powers do not just appear at random – they are specific species. For example, a being who can harness, control, cause, and create ice, wind, and snow, would have been born from parents who could do the same. One that could control water, fog, and rain would have had parents with the same powers. A child of Ice parents wouldn’t develop fire magic, for example.

These are specific species – like cats and dogs and goats and chicken they do not cross breed one with another and create “half breeds”, because it is not physically possible. They are not Humans, they do not think or act like Humans. They do not live with Humans. They can not breed with Humans and create Human/Elemental cross breeds.

How does one learn magic?

Everyone has magic in them to some extent, but few people are away of it and only rare individuals ever discover this fact or try to use it. The ones that do discover it are more spiritual or psychic. Once they discover they can tap into this *magic energy*, they must learn how to use it, otherwise it is useless to them. Their studies are very much in a Jedi Knight sort of way, with them tapping into mental energies. Magic in Humans is more of an enhanced karma thing – again – think Jedi Knight style magic.

Magical beings have it at birth and can use it to some, minor, insignificant extent, usually when angry. But they require years of training to learn how to really use it to a great advantage. As such, most Magical Beings are just somewhat different from Humans, most Frosties have a tingling cold handshake, but can’t turn you to solid ice, for example. While only those, like Jack Frost and Mother Nature, who made a career out of using magic, became really powerful.

Why would someone want to learn magic?

Usually to help the world, the people, but sometimes folks have selfish motives.

Why don’t more people know how to use magic?

It requires many long years of hard training and most people are either too lazy to bother or can not afford more than a couple of years of basic training.

Let’s see if I can add to that by answering these now:

So how does magic work in your world?

I think it’s like an energy force field for the Human Magic. But for the Elementals it’s like a natural ability, so not really magic per say, but seems like magic to Humans because Humans can’t do it.

Can everyone use it, or just some people?

All Humans *COULD* tap into the energy field and use magic if they knew they could and tried to, but almost no one knows they can and only few that know about it actually try it.

All of the Elementals use their elemental magic to some extent, but mostly in minor ways. Only a few really go all out with it.

Are you born with the ability or do you need to be taught?

Elementals are, but Humans are not.

Where does it come from, how does it exist, and how is it harnessed?

The magic Humans use is the energy given off by the earth, and they can harness it through psychic training.

The Magical Beings, elemental powers are natural abilities, and not really *magic* to them.

Is your magic similar to any other author’s ideas?

The Human magic is very Japanese Mythology and Star Wars – so, yep.

The Elemental Magic is very Norse mythology and Celtic, so, yep again.

Do you explain magic in your book, or do you hope your audience will accept it for what it is?

not sure yet – I guess we’ll find out once November rolls around.

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What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Dragons (A 2007 NaNoWriMo RePost)

Wednesday, October 14, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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I was reading the fantasy cliche` thread, when it reminded me of my old dragon rant from the 2007 forums, which btw, I had saved a copy of here on my blog. So, rather than write an all new rant on the 2009 thread, I copied my old 2007 rant (because my thoughts have not changed any) and posted it once again. Now back here on my blog, I’m repostinng this old rant.

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Repost from NaNoWriMo 2007

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On the NaNoWriMo Forums one poster asks the question:

Does having dragonriders make my novel automatically cliche/unmarketable?

After reading the entire rather long post, my first thought was:

    Dragonriders! hmmm… cool art on the covers of the Pern books! Yay for fantasy art!

My second thought was…

    huh? I can’t believe I bought all those books for the cover art! I hve yet to read one of them!

Than my thoughts turned too:

    Eragon… great movie, I’ll have to read the book someday.

Well, when it comes to dragons and dragonriders, I love them, however, every dragon/dragonrider book I’ve ever started to read, I put away before I reached the end of the first chapter. So, I’ve never actually read a dragonrider story, and can’t say wither or not yours is cliche. Why have I never read one before? Well, I start reading and by the third or second page my mind goes:

    Great idea, but bad story. Great idea, but bad writing. Great idea, but why the hell are the dragons talking? Great idea, but why aren’t the dragons eating people? Great idea, but I just don’t see dragons the same way.

In other words, I love the whole idea of dragons and dragonriders, I just don’t like the way most writers handle them. For me, when I think dragon, I think: big, firebreathing, maneating, monster. Yet when I start reading these books, I am disapointed to find that the dragons are peaceful, talking, wish-granters or some other such lovey-dovey thing. In my mind, I think of dragons as being a lot like Jurrasic Park’s T-rex: big, mean, ruthless, ready to fight, eating everything in sight, and acting like a… like an animal. Dragons are animals after all, big dino-type lizards to be exact, so why do writers always potray them as gentle loving and acting way to much like humans? I want to see some dragons that actualy act like dragons, not dragons that act like humans, but I’ve yet to find and writers who write their dragons like that.

Talking dragons piss me off. They didn’t used to. I use to love dragons. All dragons. Any dragons. But when I was a kid, dragons DIDN’T talk – they didn’t morph into humans – they didn’t foretell futures and grant wishes – and they DIDN’T talk!

I can understand a wizard/witch turns the prince into a dragon, thus now you have a talking dragon. Okay, I get that.He’s not REALLY a dragon, he’s merely under a spell, and somehow he can still talk. I’ve no problems with that.

My problem is dragons that are born talkers – a race of talking dragons. WTH? Do you know what a dragon is? Really? Anybody? A dragon is a big scaly lizard. Yep. A lizard. Shocking isn’t it? It’s nothing more than an alligator that grew as big as a house. That’s it. A lizard. How many talking lizards do you meet in the pet store? If the dragon can talk – why can’t the horses talk too? And the dogs? and the cats? and the cows? If your world is going to make one animal talk, the only way I’m going to believe it is if ALL the animals are talking.

Think about it – how would you like Jurassic Park if the T-rex suddenly stopped chasing the jeep to have a chat with one of the park guards? Do you know what a T-rex is? Really? Anybody? A T-rex is a big scaly lizard. Yep. A lizard. Shocking isn’t it? It’s nothing more than an alligator that grew as big as a house. That’s it. A lizard. How many of you think T-rex could talk?

Now I ask you, how is a dragon any different than a T-rex? And for that matter, how do we even know that dragons WEREN’T T-rexes? Dragon = big lizard. T-rex = big lizard. How many dragon legends exist? Did you ever read the REAL dragon mythology. Dragons were big mean lizards that eat sheep and cows and children. Knights, real knights, hunted them down and slaughtered them with swords. Look at the paintings of dragons – they look like alligators! They always look like alligators. Most actual dragon paintings, show a lizards about 6 feet long. The ones that show bigger dragons, look vaguely stegosaurus-like. There were hundreds of reports of dragons. In the late 1800’s one dragon was caught alive and shipped to a zoo in London – and guess what? That dragon is STILL THERE stuffed and on display, and it was identified as a Komodo Dragon – a very real, very large, meat eating, relative of the alligator. And what about the dino fossils? yep – big lizards DID roam the earth, but they didn’t talk and grant wishes.

And if you have to have talking dragons, why can’t they at least have a decent normal, lizardy type conversation with any one? Could you just see the T-rex stopping to say “Oh, by the way, you are the choosen one and I have to help you find the magic stone so you can claim your kingdom.”

No! If the T-rex is going to say anything, it’d be something like “Oh look at that tasty morsal running by. I think I’ll have me a mid-day snack.” Dragons are giant flesh eating lizards for crying out loud! Do you really think a giant meat eating lizard is going to look at the prince and want to do anything other than eat him? – and no, that’s not the dragon being mean or evil, that’s just an animal being hungry and fulfilling a basic need.

A dragon is nothing more than a 40 foot tall alligator! Can you see an alligator handing out prophecies? Only thing I can see an alligator doing it biting your head off. Come on people. . . give us some BELIEVABLE dragons for once! Real, live believable alligator, komodo, t-rex type dragons that we can look at and say – now THAT’S a dragon! Talking dragons? Godzilla makes a more believable dragon – and you all know how fake he is!

So, I will continue to love dragons and buy dragon books for the cover art, and someday I hope to run across a book that has dragons that fit my notions of what I think dragons are like.

I wouldn’t worry about cliches and such… just write from your heart and let your characters lead your story in the right direction. It’s your story, so write it your way.

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Publishing Your Novel? Read This First!
Do You and I Read the Same Books?
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Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Categories: EelKat · NaNoWriMo · Wendy C. Allen · advice for writers · dragon riders · dragonriders · dragons · fantasy · fantasy cliche · national novel writing month

Outlining Help For NaNoWriMo Members

Tuesday, October 13, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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I think one of the most common Tweets I see on Twitter is the question: I’m doing NaNoWriMo for the first time, is outlining cheating, and if not, how do I write an outline in such a short time? In previous months, weeks, and days, I was answering tweeps questions by sending them to the NaNoForums to read the threads on outlining for NaNoWriMo. At that time there were only 2 threads on outlining, so it was a simple matter, to just post the two links. However, as November draws near (now just 19 days away before the start flag drops and the writing race begins), a slew of outlining advice threads have cropped up, and all of them offering such good advice, that I’ve been recommending all of them to tweeps. Unfortunately, I can’t post more than 2 links per tweet, and with so many threads, I have to post several tweets just to answer one question.

This difficulty is compounded by the fact, that with the start date so near, tweeps are now signing up for NaNo at a rate of  nearly 10,000 new NaNoers per day! And most of them are signing up for NaNo that rushing back to Twitter to ask:  I’m doing NaNoWriMo for the first time, is outlining cheating, and if not, how do I write an outline in such a short time? You can see my dilemma (and also why my tweet count raised by 2,000 tweets in the past week!)

For the past 3 years, it has been the tradition of first year NaNoers to come to me seeking advice on what to do and how to do it, and now that I’m on Twitter, I’ve got questions being asked at me at a rate of hundreds per day, thousands per week, and the more new members of NaNo arrive, the higher the question tally becomes.

It has thus now reached the point where it is simply, not possible for me to answer individually, every tweets directed my way. I’d have to be on Twitter 24 hours a day 7 days a week, just to keep up! So, I’m making it easier for me to answer more Tweeps, by creating this post, to answer the question: I’m doing NaNoWriMo for the first time, is outlining cheating, and if not, how do I write an outline in such a short time? without my having to post tons of tweets to each tweep.

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First off, I always direct First Time NaNoers to my website which I created specifically for them:

The 13 Step Method – Reaching 50,000 Using EelKat’s Methods This of course is now the homepage for The 13 Step Method, which if you scroll back far enough, you can find the original version of, floating around on Star Log White. This details the personal outline methods I use, as well as step by step, how to ake it through the entire month without quitting.

For those who need help outlining and/or creating their characters, I send them here: Creating Character Profiles

For those needing help building a “place” for their characters to live, I send them here: Creating a Fantasy Realm

For those still without a plot, I send them here: Where do you get your ideas?

and here:
NaNo DARES 2009! (live edition)
NaNo DARES 2008! (not yet archived)
NaNo DARES 2007! (closed archive)
NaNo DARES 2006! (closed archive)
NaNo DARES 2005! (closed archive)
older years no longer available :(

The next place I send them is here: Top 5 NaNoWriMo Tools. A list of the things I use during the month of November.

For those needing help on how to become a better writer, I send them here: Become a Better Writer Today

And finally, I send them to NaNoWriMo itself via the following links:

Outlines as Roadmaps

Scene by Scene Outlining


Snowflake Method (and the link to the article this thread is referring to)


The Snowflake Method (and the link to the article this thread is referring to)


10 Scene Plot


Outlines? WHAT?


How do YOU outline?


Best reason to outline


*headSLAMdesk* Novel Outline failing hardcore. HELLLP.


am I the only person whose idea of an “outline” is a jumbled mess of scribbles?


About the length of outlines, for those that do them…


I don’t do plotlines and this is my first time doing Nano. Should I be worried?


Story Starter Cubes

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project (This is my online outline – more or less.)

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and for those looking for regulare (non-NaNo) articles on outlining you novel, try these:








Links to Novel Outline and Plot Helpers 

Blank Novel Writing Diagram
A blank template for outlining the plot for a story or novel writing reference Literature
Novel Writing Diagram Filled Out
an example for an online workshop on using a wiring diagram method to plot a novel. writing template
Ten Point Plot Template
A plotting template to help writers create a brief overview/outline of their story literature
The Novel Notebook
Nonfiction notebook with fill-in templates and examples to help writers outline, plot and work on a story or novel writing literature Nonfiction howto Literature
Single Novel Plotting Template
This template can be used to draft a novel written for any genre.
Trilogy Plotting Template
Following is a template designed for writers specifically tackling the three-book trilogy series.
Mid-Length Series Plotting Template
Following is a template designed for writers specifically tackling the mid-length series.
The Snowflake Method
The “Snowflake Method” Article

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And for added info, since another common question is what book I would recommend a first time NaNoer read;  in preparation for the contest I am currently reading (studying?) the following books:
phew! what a list! I’ve read all of them before, and I reread them each again every October, so I’ll be fired up and ready to go once the writing contest in November gets started. I highly recommend you read each of these books if you are getting ready to enter the NaNoWriMo contest, and good luck for every one who’s entering this year!



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One of the threads, linked above asked this:



[quote=Narwen_Telperindal]
am I the only person whose idea of an “outline” is a jumbled mess of scribbles?
I’m proud of myself even for taking notes this year, and I really do want to get my ideas together in a more cohesive form since I’m really excited about this story, but none of the outline forms and such that I’ve seen work with my story. (there’s no big conflict, no climax really, etc.). does anyone know of a good way to organize a non traditional storyline? or should I just stick with the jumbled mess of notes?(complete with arrows, really important stuff written in inch-tall letters, etc. )

I was thinking index cards, but I don’t know if it would be worth the effort to write them all out.
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I outline the same way you do, take notes, write down ideas, and than toss them all together and see what comes out. Here is the online version of my un-outline: http://www.squidoo.com/NaNoWriMo-2009 if you want to see what it looks like when I tried to organize my mess. Of course the online edition of it, is somewhat neater, and in a bit more order, than the offline edition of it. That is about as close to being an outline, as my “outline” is going to get! LOL!

Pretty much, the reason I put it online, was not so much to try to turn it into an outline (which as you can see, did not work!) but rather to put my mass of scrawl into a neater looking mess. Now instead of illegible pencil scratch, it is at least typed out neatly. Instead of papers scattered in every direction, it is now organized online, in a more or less chronological order (if you can call what I wrote chronological that is!) And the best part of my moving my mess online – html codes! As you can see, I went way overboard nutty with the html coding on this – adding fonts, colors, boarders, pictures, etc. Also, it allows me to add links to websites that help give me ideas.

I highly recommend you build your own website about your plot, because it well help you to at least sort your ideas out neatly, and that alone, will help you plan out what you want to write, even if you don’t write an actual “outline”. You don’t have to have an actual outline, you just arrange your notes, online, in a sort of chronological order, just sort you have them looking nice and neat. It doesn’t matter, if you get visitors to your website or not, because it’ll just be your own personal place to sort out your ideas. If you add a guestbook or comment box, you could ask visitors to offer their thoughts on your plot idea too – which could also help you out.

The site I used is free, there should be a link which the company adds automatically to all pages, where you can join – not sure where they put it – I think it says “Build a lens” or “create a lens” or something like that. (they call their sites lenses). In any case, it’s free. There are a bunch of other free website builder hosts too, you can Google “free hosted website” to find a bunch of them and see which one you like best. I’ve tried out several different ones for various topics. I think the best ones for beginners are: Squidoo, FreeWebs, Webs, Blogger, and WordPress. Also, if you have a blog, you could sort out your notes via blog posts (I do that too).

I rarely use outlines. In fact the only time I’ve ever used an outline was for NaNoWriMo, and in each case, writing up the outline proved to be a big waste of my time, because once I actually started writing, I did the exact opposite of everything my outline told me I was supposed to be doing! I concluded that outlining, really only served to tell me what I did not want to write rather than what I did want to write. I figure, if I don’t outline for my regular writing projects, than why should I outline for my NaNo projects? I’m just not someone who writes at my best with an outline. Random notes a scrawling work fine for me. They guide me along without boxing me into an outline, thus allowing me more freedom when it comes to the actual writing. So, don’t worry about outlining. Not every one needs or wants an outline, not every one writes best with an outline. Do think you NEED an outline just because someone else does. Everyone has a different method and a different style that works best for them. Go ahead and test out different styles and methods, but in the end: Do what works best for you.


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Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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fizzled fanfic idea – that happened to me last year – had months of InuYasha outlines than changed my mind mid Oct. It was weird, I had folks waiting for me to rewrite 558 because it had such a sucky ending – Rin got taken away from Sessh. I’ve followed the series for ages, and waited for a happy ending – Sessh and Rin have never had a happy ANYTHING – than suddenly the series ends with them being torn apart! So from April 2008 to Oct 2008, all I talked about was my plan to do a fan-fic novel to rewrite the final chapters of InuYasha into a better ending for Sessh and Rin. Than October came and suddenly, NaNoWriMo fever really hit in, and I tossed aside my entire plot! I think the problem was that I spent so much time planning it, that by the time it came to write it, I was bored with the idea and wanted a fresh idea for NaNo instead.

Well, my Inu fan-fic idea got swept away and replaced with 5 other plot ideas. I couldn’t decide what to write, so I started all five of them to see what would happen. 2008 was my best and worst NaNo year. I ended the month with 238k words, my best count ever. I also had a jumbled mess with 4 books scattered all over the place – none of which I ever went back to finish, mostly because the pieces of chapters are so loosely connected that the plot doesn’t flow well. Fortunately my 5th book was salvageable and I spent most of December – August editing and it was published just a few weeks ago. My only pubbed NaNo to date.

I learned a lesson – while I could have written 2 books at the same time, trying to write 5 at the same time was a big mistake. I also learned, while I could hit 200k words in 30 days – my hands just were not up to it – they hurt awful after wards because I pushed myself beyond my comfort zone. I will not try to write more than 75k for NaNoWriMo again.

I know what it’s like to have an OC and not write about them. I’ve done that too. The first time I finally wrote about one of my *avoided* OC’s, was during NaNo 2006. At first I was going to write something else, but this OC, just wouldn’t get out of my head. I think in the end, it turned out to be one of the best things I ever wrote, and I think it had a lot to do with the fact that I really liked this OC a lot.

I’m driving my 3 brothers and my SO (hopefully future husband???) crazy right now. I’m reading Jack Frost books, watch Santa Clause 3 every night. Chattering none stop about whatever my latest NaNo post was, I’m driving them all up the wall. The only ones who really understand me are my 16 cats and fellow NaNoTweeters.

I’m sorry to say the house has not been vacuumed since September – I’m just too busy obsessing over my nearly non-existent, yet 22k long outline, which has not told me anything about my plot other than the fact that I’m really too obsessed with Jack Frost. My SO says: “You know you have a problem don’t you? This novel writing month business is just a little bit more than an obsession.” I smile and point out that I have Asperger’s Syndrome with OCD tendencies – I’m supposed to go overboard with my projects. :)

I have 11 other plots that keep trying to tell me I should write them for NaNo too. I’ve told myself I’ll do one per month for the next year; if I will or not remains to be seen.

So, what should you do about yours? Well, first off, DON’T QUIT! I quit my first year, and thinking back, I realize, I should have kept going with a second plot instead. I simply got bored with my plot after about 2k words in and stopped writing! I quite almost as soon as I started. I think it was guilt over quitting back than, that caused me to try 5 novels and 200k words last year.

What would I do? I’d write both. At least I’d start writing both on November 1st, and I’d just keep writing back and forth with both, until one of the two *took off* and than I’d run with it, finishing out the month by working mostly on the one that was pulling me to write it the most. Usually, I do start out NaNo with 2 or more plots. I’ll write one for an hour, than spend the next hour writing the other one. Usually by the 7th day one of the two has fizzled into the background, while I just go at writing the other one with no thought to the first.

I think that is your best bet – start both. By the end of the month one of 4 things will have happened:

1 – you’ll have written two novels
2 – you’ll have written the fan-fic and part of the OC
3 – you’ll have written the OC and part of the fan-fic
4 – you’ll have written parts of each, tossed them both and started a third plot that you thought of in the heat of the moment

by November 30th, I usually end up with option #4. :)

If I had to choose one or the other, now, here is my thoughts on what to do:

The advantage of writing your fan-fic, is that you have folks waiting to read it already. The fact that you have folks waiting, means you’ll be more inspired to actually write the fan-fic NaNo or no NaNo.

The advantage of writing your OC, is that you’ll have a first draft of a novel which you’ll be able to polish, edit, and rewrite into a publishable MSS, which you can than have published (either trad or self) – which means you’ll see some sort of an income in the long run, from it.

The fact that it is an OC close to your heart, means you’re tempted to keep putting the story aside, longer and longer. NaNo is the perfect excuse for you to say to heck with it, and just get your OC out of your head and onto to paper once and for all, for better or worse. And if they do come out *flat*, you’ll have all of 2010 to flesh them out and turn them 3-D!

It sounds to me, like you are going to write the fan-fic anyways, and could easily write in in December after NaNo has ended. So I’d go with writing the OC story for NaNo since it’ll be a bigger challenge for you to come face to face with the fear of them not being good enough. The only way to break that fear is to get them on paper, and by getting them on paper during NaNo, you’ll be writing too fast to worry about your fears, thus enabling you to write them.

Well, that’s my thoughts at least. Hope it helps. In any case – don’t quit. Hug your husband and kiddles, remind them that November is your vacation from reality time, maybe suggest he take them out for extra activities during November? (Give you quiet time to write and give them something to do other than go bonkers about you writing.)

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Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Writing about snow (A NaNoWriMo Post)

Tuesday, October 13, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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Back again, from the NaNoWriMo forums to copy my post from there to here. Today’s subject: Snow.

[quote=PearlRose]Snow! Tell me about snow!

So, I would like to write some snow into my novel this year. It’s taking place in a fantasy realm, but still snow would be commonplace in some of the areas. Some of my characters come from places that have a lot of snow.

I, however, live in Florida, and have for my whole life!

So, tell me about snow! What does it feel like? What do you like to do in the snow? Can you tell when it’s about to start snowing–kind of like when it’s about to rain? How hard is it to walk in snow? Ice? What about different kinds of snow?

Um, enlighten me. I’ve never seen snow before.

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Outsiders, are usually taken by surprise, when they see their first Maine snow. They are rarely prepared for how deep it gets and how fast it falls. Most come here thinking they’ll see an inch or two in December. They come early planning to spend a few weeks in October looking at fall foliage. They don’t expect the first snowfall to hit in September or the fact that by October we may very well already have 4 or 5 feet of snow on the ground. In February 2005 we got hit with a 9 foot snow fall, which fell in less than 3 hours. Around here – doors open in not out, you keep your shovels indoors, you have a wood stove and case loads of candles, and you have a food supply of no less than 5 months worth of food on your selves at all times. You plan on going weeks on end with no electricity, no roads, no contact with anyone, and this in a town with 12,000 people, 15 miles from a town with 64,000 people.

It shock tourists when the reality hits them, that they could and often are, trapped in a place without electricity or phones (and forget about cell phones working). Why? Because snow is heavy and it topples 200 foot tall pine trees, across roads, lines, and rooftops. Very few people who come vacationing in Maine, stop the really think about just how harsh winter in Maine, really is.

Places that get a few inches of snow a year, are far different than places that get a few feet of snow a week. People that seeing only a dusting of snow (in Maine a dusting is any snowfall less than a foot deep), often view snow as fun. They look forward to it, as though it was a novelty. Maine gets snow 11 months of the year. In my town, Old Orchard Beach, the only month I have not personally seen snow was August.

In a place like this, we plan our entire year around the snow. We have to. It’s a fact of life, that if you want to live in Maine year round you have to be prepared for snow at a moment’s notice and without warning. (about two-thirds of the locals are not 12 month residents, living here only from May to October)

What does it feel like?

Depends on the weather.

If the temperature is warm (40F) than the snow is wet, slushy, and sticky. It’s like a snow cone or slush puppy icy drink falling from the sky. This type of snow hits the ground in a watery mess and can cause major flooding of rivers, streams, brooks, creeks, etc. Along swamps and marshes, roads wash out. This type of snow fall is very, very, very, very heavy – it topples pine trees, caves in roofs, collapses roads, washes out bridges, and over all creates havoc. Warm wet slushy snow is the least welcomed of the snow falls. It’s too heavy to shovel, too wet for snow-plows (I believe they are called snow throwers in the south, because that’s what our Florida tourists always call them.), too slippery to walk in. This type of snow is rarely seen in forested regions, and is most often seen in urban city regions, especially in places with lots of tall buildings (which give off heat that melts the snow as it falls). Rarely do these slushy storms ever get more than 6 inches tall and usually they melt away in a week or snow. They tend to fall in late spring (March – May here in Maine).

Snow that comes below 30F is soft and light and fluffy. It is called “Cold Snow” due to the fact that it only occurs when the temperatures are really, really, really cold. This is the best type of snow in every way. It does little if any damage, it’s easy to shovel, it’s easy to walk in, and the storm itself rarely is an issue. This snow, can however, come in huge waves – because it is light and fluffy, it is easily picked up by high winds, causing “white out conditions”. These storms can also sit in one spot and last for days on end. Around here, snow drifts are 10 or 12 feet tall, even if only one or two feet of snow fell. In mountain areas these drifts can reach in excess of 20 feet tall. Because the snow is so light weight it drifts like the sand dunes of Egypt and even when it is NOT snowing, you can have a white out, simple because high winds, blow the already fallen snow back up into the air. This is the type of snow most often seen during a blizzard, and is more common in mountain regions, than in urban or coastal regions. It is rarely seen in cities, due to the buildings giving off so much heat. These storms can happen any time of the year, providing the temperature is cold enough (less than 30F or 0C).

In between these two temps comes what we call “snowman snow” – which is a cross between the wet slushy stuff and the light fluffy stuff. It’s not as heavy as the slush type, but still heavy enough to be difficult to shovel. It’s light enough to drift, but because of it’s sticky nature, it packs in tight and freezes into huge blocks of ice, which are sometimes impossible to shovel through. This is the snow that children look for, because it’s the one that usually results in school closings, and it’s also the ONLY type of snow in which you can build snow men and snowballs, or go sledding. This type of snow, is often seen in blizzards and a single storm can dump 4 or 5 feet or more in just a couple of hours.

Than there is “black ice” a strange sort of snow fall that happens, when the temperature fluctuates during a storm. Usually black ice occurs when the temps are really cold and a lot of light fluffy snow is falling, than suddenly a warm front comes in during the storm, causing the snow to turn to rain. This warm front usually only lasts a matter of minutes – quickly followed by another blast of cold winds, and a sudden instant temperature drop falling to below zero, instantly freezing the rain, on top of the snow. The end result has one of two effects, depending on how mush snow fell before it started raining. If a lot of snow fell, say a foot or more, the end result it a hard crusty snow which cuts through flesh causing deep wounds and nasty gashes in hands, legs, and knees, should you fall down. The problem is you are so cold that you don’t start bleeding until you go indoors, and often, you do not know you have cut yourself until you go inside again, and suddenly feel a sharp piercing pain. If the ice on top of the snow is deep enough, you can walk on top of the snow, just as if you are walking on solid ground. Beware though should your foot find a thin patch and go through the ice, because it will slash your ankle and leg to ribbons, like razors. This snow is near impossible to shovel, and most locals, take to stomping down paths, instead of even trying to shovel it. This type of black ice storm, takes months to melt, because the ice itself, can be up to 10 or 12 inches deep, due to it having soaked into the snow rather than melting the snow. This type of snow usually falls in late winter (December – January here in Maine)

The second form of black ice, is by far the most dangerous type of snow storm there is – death tolls stager after a black ice storm of this type. In this one, only an inch or so of snow fell, before the temp rose and rain took over. Because so little snow fell, usually all of it is melted away by the rain in a matter of minutes. Than the deep freeze blows over and freezes the ice, and this is where black ice gets it’s name from – because of the strange shift in temperatures, the rain freezes extremely fast into a mirror smooth finish, which is nearly invisible to the human eye. On trees, plants, and blades of grass it is called hoer-frost, but on tar roads, it is called black ice, because the roads appear just as black as ever, and drivers have no idea there is anything wrong with the roads, until they suddenly lose complete control of their car and are sent speeding faster and faster down the road until they finally come to an instant, and usually fatal halt, by hitting something. Most black ice storms around here, see a dozen or more deaths per storm, always from car crashes. Also, walking on black ice roads and pathways in impossible unless you are wearing cleats. This type of black ice, usually melts away after a day or two of sunshine has beat down on it, leaving just as quickly as it arrived. We can see this type of snow during any of the 12 months of the year, here in Maine, but usually see in hit us every single day in February, every single year. When black ice hits every day, day after day like that, it is than referred to as an Ice Storm. See Ice Storm 98 for more detailed info on the biggest storm to hit not only Maine, but most of NorthEast America: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/North_American_ice_storm_of_1998

What do you like to do in the snow?

Around here – it’s not a question of what you LIKE to do in the snow, but rather, HOW can you do what you like to do in the snow.

Can you tell when it’s about to start snowing–kind of like when it’s about to rain?

The first thing you will notice before a snow storm – is dead silence. It is like every single bird suddenly dropped dead. They all go silent all at once, usually within an hour of the storm. That is quickly followed by a sharp, blast of cold wind, and the sky suddenly going completely grey, with huge low, foggy, silver grey clouds rolling in all around you. It’s like a tornado or a hurricane is about to strike, but instead, it’s a blizzard.

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I too am writing a snowy winter story. I started my NaNoWriMo planning on August 1st (just as I do every year.) My problem, as always when I start a new book, is that as soon as I get an idea and start researching it, while I’m researching, other ideas pop up and I end up planning several books at once. This can cause problems with NaNoWriMo, because with a timed contest like this, you have to write at the seat of your pants, non stop break neck speed, which means once the contest starts, you really can’t stop your novel and start a second, third, or fourth one dead in the middle! In my early years of NaNoing this has been a problem – heck, it was a problem last year too!

Anyways, in order to give myself time to change my mind about my plot 10 or 20 times, I start my NaNoNovel plotting in August instead of October with every one else, and it’s a good thing I did. This year I ended up with 13 plots between August 1st and September 30st!

In August, my goal was to write about a creepy circus. I love creepy circuses, always have, always will. Throughout the month of August all my Tweets chattered about my circus history research, but as the month wore on, more ideas popped up and my circus idea changed and evolved many times. From Steampunk to Horror to Romance to Fantasy and than back and forth between them all, my NaNoNovel has yet to settle down into a genre, but it’s plot, has become more clear.

So hot sunny August quickly went by, followed just as fast by September. No, almost. Something happened this year, something rarely seen. Something that threw a plot right in my lap, complete with characters. You see, I’m a farmer in a tourist town on the North Atlantic coast. That means winter comes fast, and summer is fleeting, our growing season is short, barely a 100 days long even in our best years, and when tourists hit the beach, they hit it all at once on one of the few days that we get each year without snow.

We start planting in May (providing the snow has melted that soon) and we hope we can get everything harvested before mid October when the first blizzard season of the winter starts. (Our “big” 9 foot blizzards of February, make our much smaller four foot blizzards of October look like a dusting.) Our town has a strange meteorological phenomena caused by the extreme cold winds that blow in off the Gulf of Maine and get trapped in Saco Bay. While the rest of the Southern Maine’s growing region is listed by the weather services as zone 5, here in Old Orchard Beach, we have a zone 4 growing season most years, and a zone 3 season in the colder years. Our summers rarely reach 70F and our winters commonly dip to -20F. Wind chill factors bring our temps to -40F from December to February. It’s like somebody cut a piece out of Alaska and dropped in next door to Portland just to be funny. (Yes, mini icebergs have formed on the shores of Old Orchard Beach – it’s rare, but it has happened.) Why we get this extreme cold while the rest of Maine does not, has been explained by weather men as having something to do with the way Saco Bay is shaped. It’s shaped like a horseshoe with a very small opening, which let’s the wind in off the ocean, but than traps it there holding the cold air in, all year long.

This year, has been abnormal, even for us. In 2009 our growing season started late – it was the first week of June by the time the ground had thawed enough to plant – a result of heavy rains the fall of 2008, getting frozen deep in the ground just before a blizzard than hit us in mid October that same week. By May 2008 we still had snow well over a foot tall covering most of our garden plot. This was highly unusual, because by May first we usually have the ground tilled and planted. Our growing season lost a whole month this year.

Usually when we have a late spring, we also have a late winter, so our growing season stays about the same. That is what we expected. Therefor, in August when I started planning my NaNoNovel, I did not plan on an early winter to take us by surprise. Second week of September 2009, after a night of Tweeting about my circus ideas, we awoke to find an alarmingly early frost had snuck in during the night and decimated our crops nearly 4 full weeks before harvest time!

To make things worse, the early cold, drove fish deep into the sea to escape the cold blasts on top of the ocean – meaning not only did farmers lose their crops, but fisherman lost their hauls as well.

To go one step farther – in mid-September our tourist season is not yet over. Palace Playland (the beach side amusement park) is still open and running, ice cream and pizza shops are still open, bikini clad tourists are still shopping, – the early cold front chased all the tourists out of Maine, forcing the rides and shops to shut down early.

As is normal for winter in Old Orchard, shops are boarded and shuttered, buildings are empty and the few of us that stay in this cold icy town year round, are once again living in a ghost town – a full two months earlier than normal!

And while normally I would complain at this early arrival of winter killing crops, chasing away tourist income, and driving me indoors to flee the harsh cold ocean winds – this could not have happened at a more perfect time! I had my creepy circus to write about, but no reason to write about them, no reason for them to be creepy, and more importantly, I had no characters to write about. November is fast coming upon us and I still had no clear idea what I wanted to write – and than this happens, and suddenly, riding in on an ocean breeze, everything makes perfect sense to me now – the story, the plot, where the circus came from, why they are here, what they want, and more importantly – who my main character is whom is leading my creepy circus onward: Jack Frost.

Of course, weird way our seasons are, this freak frost only lasted 2 days and than our weather went back to normal for this time of year. It came just long enough to kill crops, ruin fishing, and chase away tourists, leaving our town a ghost town. Oh well. In any case, it lasted long enough to give me a plot idea. And I thought it might be of interest to you for your own story, since I haven’t seen anyone mentioning frost yet. (frost usually sets in a few weeks before the first snow fall, so you can be sure that once you’ve had a frost, snow will soon follow.)

One thing I have not seen mentioned is the snow plows -

You don’t have to go too far South to find a big difference between out of state snow plows, and Maine snow plows. It’s not uncommon for people as close away as Massachusetts to ooggle at the size of Maine plow trucks and ask – Do you really get enough snow to need a plow that BIG?!? Around here, it’s not pick-up trucks with dinky litt;e snow pusher plows on the front; around here we have trucks that are specifically built with one purpose in mind – to be tall enough, wide enough, big enough, and heavy duty enough to drive single sweep through a 12 foot snow drift.

If you are talking about a place that gets a lot of snow, you’ll want to consider the size of their snow removal equipment. Most towns in Maine have at least one, and places that get the big storms have an entire fleet, of them. They vary in size from dump trucks to giant land movers.

Here’s one of the land-mover plow trucks without it’s plows on it:

http://www.hankstruckpictures.com/pix/trucks/mark_simiele/2005/aug/file0006.jpg

http://www.hankstruckpictures.com/pix/trucks/macneil/2008/10-20/sander.jpg

Here’s a few pictures of these trucks in action:

http://tinyurl.com/yzojp4d

http://www.hankstruckpictures.com/pix/trucks/andy_bruchey/2005/dec31/dot-plow.jpg

http://i.ehow.com/images/GlobalPhoto/Articles/4665686/snowplowtruck-main_Full.jpg

Another thing to consider is that, in spite of the huge size of these plow trucks, it takes a lot more than one of them to get the job done. Here’s a picture of a full plow team in action: http://colledun.com/gallery/albums/TowPlow/TowPlow.sized.jpg Notice how they stagger the trucks.

Don’t forget that in the north country where you find a lot of snow, you also find a lot of trains. For many months of the year, the roads are too icy for tractor-trailer-trucks to get through, thus necessitating the use of freight trains to get deliveries through. Here in Maine, you either got logging trucks, land movers, plow tucks, or freight trains. However, snow will derail a train in seconds, and huge 12 foot drifts will cover a track in a matter of minutes (whether it has snowed recently or not – the wind moved the snow, even weeks after the snowing has stopped). For that reason, there are snow plows, even bigger than the plow trucks themselves. These plows are attached to the fronts of the train and gobble up the snow as the train moves. Here are three different types of train plows:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3105/2706699401_b75da2ebb9.jpg

http://www.trainsarefun.com/lirr/mow/plow5.jpg

http://www.ovar.ca/Railfan/cn/cn55550_caboose_plow.jpg

WOW! I just realized how big my answer got – it’s almost a novel in itself! LOL! I had better stop writing before I overload NaNo’s servers with this one post!

Well, in any case, I hope that helps you out some. Good luck with your story!

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Ghosts for NaNoWriMo

Tuesday, October 6, 2009 · 1 Comment

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Searching for ghost posts on the NaNoWriMo forums today and found this one:

Ghost Story?
Hi. I’m writing a ghost story this year, I think, and I’m wondering if anyone has ever met or heard a story of someone meeting a ghost. I would like to interview you or them. And also if anyone has heard of any ancient stories of posessed items bringing a ghost with them, please let me know. Thanks.

My answer:

In 2008, there was a ghost story thread. I saved my post from it, just before the relaunch, and it should have some info to help you out. Part of my answer, includes an encounter I had. I’ll paste it here for you. Uhm, because it came off last year’s forum though, I don’t think the links are still clickible though, because they went to posts from last year’s forum, while has since been deleted. :( Oh well. Anyways, here’s the copy of the post I saved from last year’s forum. Hope it helps.

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Anyone Working With Ghosts?]

I see plenty of zombie and vampire themes, but is anyone else working with ghosts? Mine sort of glow in the dark – or rather they can if they want – is that typical?

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I’m planning on ghosts for 09, still trying to figure them out though. I think they died in a train accident, and now 100 years later a town has built up on that spot, so they are “haunting” the town.

I’m thinking that they can change appearance “slightly” by that I mean from solid to transparent, so that when people first see them, they don’t realize that they are ghosts.

I’m thinking that they avoid physical contact with the living though because their bodies are cold as ice and “freeze” humans when they touch them, thus giving away their ghostliness.

I’m also thinking that when they go all transparent that they have a pale blue glowing mist around them.

[quote=Vinxman]MMy ghosts glowed to some people, but not to everyone. Everyone saw them differently, based on their fears.[/quote]

That’s sort of what I’m doing – my ghosts “feed” on the fears of the living – sort of like how vampires feed on blood, so they appear different to different people depending on what that person’s fear is.

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Why are ghosts scary?]

You know the old Scooby Doo episides, they always run away from the ghost. Why? What makes them scary? What do they think the ghosts are going to do to them?

If you saw a ghost, would you be afraid? Why? (Or why not?) What is the fear of?

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[quote=Laura1013]If I saw a ghost, and was aware that was what I was seeing, you would have to pry me off the ceiling afterward. Ghosts are scary because:
1. They might want something from you
2. You can’t kill them
3. If you lock the door, they can float right through it
4. They look creepy
5. You can’t always see them. So they could be watching you and you not know it. How do you fight against THAT?[/quote]

[quote=Mistress Sekhmet]You have to remember that ghosts can be confined to certain areas, banished, trapped in mirrors or water and easily removed if causing trouble. Most often, from my own experiences, ghosts don’t tend to bother folk without being provoked. I know a guy who does paranormal research and gets into so much trouble because he just doesn’t listen and his crew is not trained properly.

After a particular investigation, all members of that crew became ill, went through losses, had automotive troubles and other nasty stuff happen. Why? Because the dummies wanting to catch something on film and evp, provoked something in the house improperly by being rude. If I were a ghost and someone came into my space being nasty, they’d get nasty sent right back. It’s not to say that all ghosts are not indifferent or unfriendly, because ghosts, like people vary. Overall, it’s best not to provoke any being when you don’t know what you’re dealing with and approach any situation with caution.

It’s best to use common sense at all times and if you are afraid, leave.[/quote]

[quote=BHeins69]I’ve never seen a ghost myself. But my husband used to have a ghost in his house when I first met him. It seemed pretty harmless, mostly did little pranks. It scared the hell out of my husband. He’d call me to come get him and I’d find him walking blocks away from his house. His mother liked the ghost, she named him George and came to discover that a man who died in the house was named George. He whistled like his ghost. He’d do things like rearrange her slippers when she’d get into the shower. Once she ‘bumped’ into him in the hallway. It was dark, but she could feel the presence of a big man. She thought it was her husband and she called his name, but when Jim answered it was from inside the bedroom not in front of her. When they turned the light on the presence was gone.

The ghost did hold my husband down. He was face down in the bed and he could feel someone pressing him down so he couldn’t move. He couldn’t scream either. He just laid there until he relaxed and then when he opened his eyes it was gone.
Other times they’d hear knocking on the walls. Once a fire extinguisher flew off the refrigerator. Maybe some ghosts are mischievous or just want to make their presence known.

I’m writing a ghost story and it totally creeps my husband out. He’s very sensitive to this ghost stuff.[/quote]

[quote=NotAnotherExit]Ghosts don’t exist in the same sort of world that we do. They’ve been dead for who knows how long. Their wants, their needs, their desires… these are all consuming and unknowable. Ghosts don’t care how we feel. They don’t care that we will die. They might even want to help us make that last little journey beyond mortality. And who knows? Maybe they can.

If I saw a ghost, it would depend on the type, as to whether or not it frightened me. A rough looking gentleman, a dead looking soul, those would scare me. A nice looking lady, however, might not.

Little girls have such a bad wrap from horror movies that no matter how nice and peaceful they look, it would probably terrify me.[/quote]

[quote=MartianMenace]I think ghosts are unsettling, because by their very existence they seem to be a negation of the religious beliefs a lot of us take comfort in. If ghosts exist, does that mean there’s no heaven? No other afterlife? Why do they exist?

And the most frightening idea of all – when we die, is that going to happen to US?[/quote]


I think ghosts are scary because you don’t see them every day and even when you say you believe in them, deep down you don’t truly believe in them until you actually see one. I think it’s like anything else that is unusual or rare or thought to be a myth: (vampires, werewolves, zombies, etc) your first response is always to freeze, than run, than stop and ask yourself why you were scared, than go to investigate. It’s just the whole *unknowness* of it, which startles the senses.

once when I was very young maybe 10 or 12 years old, around that time, I woke up to see a man walk through my door, go straight across the room, and than stand staring out the window. He was transparent and had a neon blue glow all around his body; I couldn’t see his feet, it was like at the top of his head he was more solid, but his body got more transparent as it went down until his feet were invisible; He had a very old style dress – late 1300’s era possibly Flemish or German or French. I got the impression that he was very sad, that he had died a long time ago and that he was “alone” (alone in that he could not see or hear any one around him, and had no idea I was there, or that any one else was anywhere either; like every one on the planet had vanished and there was no one left but him – or at least that is how he felt.)

I was not afraid. I don’t know if it was because I was too young to be afraid, or it was because I could tell I had nothing to fear, or what.

I think it is because of this “sighting” that I write about ghosts and describe them as semi transparent with a blue glowing mist around them, because that’s what the one I saw looked like.

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Do Ghosts Speak?]

I’m writing a ghost story. And as I was describing the plot to my mother, she asked, “Is the ghost going to tell him that?” And I paused. Well, I don’t think the ghost can talk. But I don’t know. It would help my plot. But it seems silly.

So…. if the ghost in the book you were reading spoke, what would you think?

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[quote=Frank_Haba]In literature ghosts speak or try to communicate a great deal. Think of Shakespeare or Dickens, or go back to “Castle of Otranto.” Even the Bible has a talking ghost…(King Saul did some summoning and spoke to the departed spirit of Samuel, remember?)

In modern culture, a great example of scary ghost talking to the living is in the del Toro film “The Devil’s Backbone.” In the film the MC asks the ghost directly what it wants and the ghost replies very specifically (a fantastic scene in a fantastic movie BTW).

The bottom line is that yes there is a history of ghosts communicating with the living characters to achieve some end, but ultimately it is up to you. What is your ghost’s purpose, and what would it achieve by communicating? If done right, it can be a chilling moment of realization for the MC. Just some food for thought. Hope it helps…

Frank[/quote]

In popular culture ghosts speak (literature, movies, etc.) but how many REAL documented cases are there of ghosts that talked, or for that matter – how many documented cases are there of ghosts even acknowledging that they know you are in the room with them? Real non-fiction cases with talking ghosts or ghosts that even acknowledge they can see/hear the living are exceptionally rare. Most actual cases report the ghost doing the same ritual movements again and again (walking to the same window; pace on the same porch; siting in the same chair) and doing it completely oblivious to their current soundings.

Only in books and movies do ghosts speak or otherwise interact with the living.[/quote]

Hope that helps. I’m doing ghosts this year too. The ghosts in my novel, as mentioned above are cold and glow blue. Since writing that post originally, I have since determined that my ghosts are “frost ghosts”, in other words, the ghosts of people who froze to death, and came back as sort of ice demons.

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Necessary Elements of Horror (A NaNoWriMo Post)

Tuesday, October 6, 2009 · Leave a Comment

Cruising the NaNoWriMo forums today, I found this question to answer:

Necessary Elements of Horror — Help?

I’ve never done horror before, and it’s hard to find much genre-fiction tips for inexperienced writers.

Are there certain plot elements or structural conventions that one generally needs to follow when writing horror?

Any and all help is welcome.

Thanks!

I think the only really *necessary* element I can think of is this: In order to be horror, your readers must be horrified in some way or another. This can range from mild tingling chills of suspense to out right screaming terrified. In other words, events must be eerie, which can range from childhood fears of an imagined bogyman under the bed to the actual terror of finding your best friend half eaten by zombies.

If you are looking for a basic outline to follow, here is how most horror novels unfold:

    Usually a horror will start out with a nice happy, boringly normal person, living a predictably dull life, in a predictably dull town, where nothing out of the ordinary ever happens, but by the fifth page, s/he’ll start noticing that today is not an ordinary day – a few out of the ordinary things have happened, and out of curiosity s/he decides to investigate. By chapter 3 his/her life in turned upside down by *INSERT EVIL FORCE-MONSTER-VILLAIN-BAD GUY HERE*, and now his/her *life-friends-family-school-town-or-world* is in eminent danger. Your main character for whatever reason is the only one that can stop the evil force and save the day. Evil force seems unstoppable and gets progressively creepier, scarier, and seemingly more undefeatible with each chapter. In the next to the last chapter, all hope is lost, and it seem the evil force has at last won, but that somehow your MC takes control of the situation and defeats the evil force. The last chapter is reserved for tying up lose ends and show how your main character picks up the pieces and gets back on with their ordinary dull boring life once again.

Of course you can change that, but that is the basic story board that most * published* horror novel use.

As for determining what horror elements you should use, I think of it this way: Ask yourself what would scare you if you met it face to face, and write about it. For example, me, I’ve always been scared of the dark so my stories are always set not only at night, but also in a secluded dark place with no street lights – say in the middle of a forest – on a night with no moon. I’ve never felt to well about rats either, not after a weird childhood experience of living in a house infested with hordes of them, and as such, my horror stories tend to have rats scurrying here and there. I’ve been a fan of the Universal Monsters for 30+ years now – resulting in me writing lots of stuff with vampires, werewolves, and their kin. I’ve also a morbid fascination with insane asylums and escaped serial killing psychos – so these run rampant in most of my horror stories as well.

Long story short, my point here is – write what you think of when you think of horror. If you think of haunted houses and ghosts – write haunted houses and ghosts. If you think zombies – write zombies. What type of horror do you read? What type of horror do you watch? Reread and rewatch your favorite horror books and movies and see if you can find any reoccurring elements in them. Chances are good that those elements are the ones you are personally most attracted to, and thus the ones you are best suited to writing about.

Best book for anyone looking to write horror is On Writing Horror: A Handbook by the Horror Writers Association

Read the Complete Stories and Poems of Edgar Allan Poe to get a feel of how classic horror is written. Also watch all of the Vincent Price movie remakes of Poe’s stories. I get most of my inspiration from Poe and Price. Nothing can inspire me to wite horror the way they can.

And another question asked on the same note was this:

Stories from the Afterlife: Supernatural or Spiritual?

So, my tentative idea for NaNo this year is actually a warm-up story that I was working on for NaNo ‘08. The main character dies within the first page, and the entire story is about his exploits in the great beyond. Now granted, it’s not the usual heaven and hell, reincarnation and nirvana, purgatory and redemption sort of afterlife; it’s sort of like what the afterlife would look like if it was run on capitalism, with how “good” you are as currency . . . vague as that might be. On the flipside, you really don’t want to know what happens when your “bad” far outweighs your “good” quota . . . let’s just say that filing for bankruptcy is not an option.

The real question is, where the hell does this story fit? I’m quite sure it’s a Supernatural type of thing (with plenty of horrifying moments to add some spice), but couldn’t it also fit in the Spiritual genre, even if it’s not about a particular religion?

What my novel is not:

A soapbox for my own views of morality and the afterlife–I don’t like to make assumptions about something I’m sure I cannot fully understand.
An insult to any religions out there–I just thought it would be a fun setting to play with.
What it is:

A story about a complete nobody that can change the world, with deceit, betrayal, love, life, death, and everything that makes a human being human. Also comes with unthinkable demonic horrors and spiritual enlightenment.
. . . because happens to be set in the hereafter.
For now I’m going to keep sitting in the Supernatural section because I’m pretty sure it’s the right one, but it did get me thinking . . . with a setting like this, where do you draw the line between genres?

To classify as horror, you have to be scaring the daylights out of your readers in terrifyingly horrific ways. Frankly, I just don’t see that in your synopsis.

Supernatural, implies vampires, faeries, are other supernatural beings that do not exist in the real world. They can exist in any and all genres. When in Horror, supernatural beings tend to be evil, blood thirsty and violent – vampires, werewolves, zombies, and poltergeist style ghosts, whose purpose in being in the story is the scare your reader into hiding under the covers and sleeping with every light in the house on. Ghosts, demons, and angels (such as your story) are supernatural beings that could be considered horror if they terrify the readers, but they could also be considered spiritual if they tell a moral tale (not necessarily religious).

From reading your synopsis here, I don’t see your novel as falling into the Spiritual genre either though.

Your story seems more to be one of fantastic proportions. A story telling of another place (a sort of heaven/hell place), in another time (a future afterlife). If I was an editor (which, btw, I am) and was going to publish your novel, I would place it under Fantasy instead, possibly Dark Fantasy.

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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NaNoWriMo Q&A (A Blog Meme – Consider Yourself Tagged)

Monday, October 5, 2009 · Leave a Comment

You know I like blog memes. You also know it’s been a while since I’ve done one on this blog. Today I found a new one, just for NaNoWriMo contestants. If you are reading this and you are signed up for NaNoWriMo this year, than consider yourself tagged, and add this to your own blog, FB note, or MySpace bulletin. Don’t forget to link back to the original creator of the meme and leave a comment on his post (he’s compiling a list of the answers!)

NaNoWriMo Q&A

In preparation for National Novel Writing Month next November, I thought it would be fun to look back at previous NaNo’s and answer some questions about how I take part in the event.

These questions or this meme as you might call it is totally meant for people to use on their own blogs, Livejournals, Facebooks etc. Leave links in the comments section and I might compile a list.

Double points if you post a photo with your answers in some NaNoWriFic action shot like I have so awesomely done.

When and how did you find out about NaNoWriMo? How did you go?
I’m a long time user of The Seventh Sanctum. In fall of 2004 they sent out an announcement about The National Novel Writing Month Contest. I did not check out the link, until a few weeks later, unfortunately the contest was like 3 days from ending by that point. I joined in late November 2004, but did not compete in the contest until the 2005 one. During the 2006 relaunch of the forums, most of the 2004 archive was lost to a server meltdown and nearly every one who signed up in 2004 lost their accounts. So now my account says I joined in 2006, but so does every one else who originally joined in 2004 too. =/

How many times have you done NaNoWriMo?
NaNoWriMo 2009 will be my 5th year at NaNo. So far I’ve had 4 years and 3 wins and this year I’m going for my fourth win.

How many times have you won? If you haven’t won, what was your best result?
I signed up in 2004, but it was 2 days before the end of the contest and too late to write anything. I don’t consider 2004 to be a year I participated, since I only signed up and never actually wrote a single word.

I failed my first year (2005) …did like 2,000 before I got bored with my plot.

I did 183,000 my second year (2006) … kind of to make up for failing the first year, but than never went back to edit it.

I reached 75,000 third year (2007), but I never finished the story!

In 2008, I did the unthinkable and changed my goal from 50k to 200k. YOW! But I did it and finished out the month with my biggest total ever: 238,153 words in 30 days!!!! (spaced out over 5 different books btw – none of which I totally finished, but one of which has since been nearly finished and at the time of this writing had just finished going through it’s 4th draft! YAY!)

Now NaNoWriMo 2009 is bearing down upon us and I’ve decided to try to beat my total last year and try for 250K or more. YIKES! Well, my goal is to do one novel at 75k this year and if I have time, to just keep doing as many more 75k novels as I can before the 30th.

Buddy me here.

How did you go last year?
I’ve done NaNoWriMo so many times now that 50k also wasn’t really a challenge for me any more! When November rolls around now I look at it and go: “Ho hum, 50k, been there done that – I need a bigger challenge now.” I know I can do 50k in 30 days. I’ve done it several times. I also knew I could reach 150k because I did it during one year already. So this time, for 2008, I decided to give myself a challenge – could I reach 200k in 30 days? That meant I would have to write not 1,667 words per day but instead 6,667 word per day! On day one I wrote 12,000 words and I knew from that moment on, 200k was well within my reach.

So, here’s the thing – 50k was no longer a challenge. I needed a challenge. I gave myself a challenge. And in the end, I wrote 5 NaNoNovels in 30 days instead of one NaNoNovel in 30 days. I also learned something by the end of NaNo 2008 – I’m never again going to try to juggle 5 novels at once! I only finished one of them, the other 4 ended up a scattered mess of non-connected chapters, and after 30 days of 7k to 12k words per day my hands HURT!

I learned a lesson last year – I can do it if I push myself, but my quality of write goes right down the toilet. My goal in everything I write, is always to publish it when I get done. Last year, I had written 5 books, but only one was salvageable and went on to seeking publication. The other 4, I now look at as a waste of my time. They were good ideas, but handled badly because I put reaching word count over writing a novel. I don’t want to repeat that again.

The lesson here: Challenge yourself! NaNoWriMo is all about giving yourself a challenge. If this is your first time, than the 50k is a big challenge. After you’ve done it a few years, you may want to try to up the challenge and shoot for a higher word count. The important thing is that you set goals for yourself – goals that you feel you can meet. But don’t hurt yourself doing it!

So, yeah think about what you are doing BEFORE you start. Know ahead of time that those of us who have done and/or are planning to do again, the huge word counts for NaNoWriMo DID NOT start writing yesterday! We have been writing for years! We write daily or near daily! Most of us are already writing 50k a month anyways, and us NaNo to challenge ourselves to bigger word counts than is normal for us. But doing these big goals is NOT for everyone, so don’t do it unless you have had a lot of practice writing a lot of words on a daily basis for several years! 50k is A LOT for someone who is not used to writing, so don’t push yourself past it unless you are physically able to. You don’t want to end up in the hospital or even lose your ability to write at all! Please consider your health when taking on a big word count!

Every year there are members who try to reach 100k, 200k, 300k, 500k, or even more in 30 days. Some of them can and do, do it, but remember – these people are professional writers with years of practice. If you are not a professional writer or do not have the practice – DO NOT ATTEMPT the huge word count goals! This can not be over stated! There are people who have pushed themselves too far doing NaNoWriMo and ended up with Carpel Tunnel Syndrome and in some cases needed surgery to be able to use their hands again. I too have had surgery (on my right hand) as a result of too much writing. Sadly as an artist, this had a terrible affect on my ability to continue my formerly life-like drawings, forcing me to change my art style. (This was many years before NaNoWriMo btw – I had surgery at age 17 because of Carpel Tunnel Syndrome- I always did write more than was good for me.)

This year, I’ve come back to my senses. I reached 238k last year, so I proved to myself I COULD do it if I tried, but I also proved to myself that I don’t really LIKE writing that much all at once. So, this year, I’m sticking with a goal in my own comfort zone – 75k. I know I can do 75k. It’s a good size which most publishers like to see and I won’t have to hurt my hands again, like I did last year.

Where do you write and with what do you write?
I do most of my plotting and planning outdoors in my garden, in the forest, or on the beach, and as such have tons of (several hundred) notebooks filled with illegible hand written scrawlings that only I can interpret.

The actual novels themselves have each been different. In 2006, thanks to first a flood in May and than a fire in October, I found myself by November, homeless, computerless, internetless, and living under a tarp on the streets. My entire 183k novel was written in long hand and the words counted manually. It was the last volume of The Twighlight Manor series in which I killed off the main character Etiole Swanzen, and has, to this date, yet to be typed up, and due to it’s nature, has no plans to be published any time soon, as I continue to write other stories for The Twighlight Manor series, in which Etiole is still alive. (Info about the real Etiole on whom the fictional one was based can be found here.)

In 2007, the first half of my novel was typed on the computer, but a winter storm ripped though and left us with no electricity for the last half of the month (this is Maine after all), so the book stopped at 75k and was never finished.

2008 saw me typing up 5 novels simultaneously. Only one: For Fear of Little Men (a non-fiction memoir) made it to the end.

How do you find time to write?
I am a professional writer. I wrote my first book in 1978. Writing is my career. If I don’t write, I don’t get paid. Writing is a 9 to 5 job. I write every day, all day, stopping for lunch. I do this 5 days a week and have done so for 31 years now. I have time to write because I MAKE time to write. Writing is my life. I don’t do anything else.

Are your partners, friends and family allies or enemies?
I have none of the above.

What are you strengths and what do you use to help you get to the end?
Honestly, I’m a damn good writer. I enjoy writing. I love my stories. I love my characters. I don’t use anything to motivate me or keep me going until the end – I don’t need it. I just plan like to write. As for my actual writing methods and tools I use to write, well click the links to see what I do, step by step.

What are you weaknesses, obstacles and challenges that hinder you from finishing?
I have Autism, it has all sorts of weird affects on my writing.

Do you plot/outline/plan or do you write by the seat of your pants? How much do you plot or how unprepared are you?
I outline, but not in the traditional sense of the word. Here is my online outline for my 2009 NaNoWriMo Novel, which will show you just exactly what I mean when I say my outlines are not your typical outlines.

Do you participate in the real life community, go to write ins and meet ups in your area?
I’m on the NaNoWriMo forums year round. My region is the Saco Bay Region of the Maine District. I attend all the Saco parties, write-ins, etc. and get to met face to face the people I spend so much of my time talking with online.

What are your writing aids? Special snacks, music, totems, rewards or punishments?
Music? Why Liberace of course! Would you expect anything else from his ever devoted, over obsessed, #1 screaming fangirl? I have a NaNoWriMo playlist which also includes System of a Down, Serj Tankian, David Bowie, DropKick Murphies, Alice Cooper, and Nightwish along side Liberace – wow what a messed up mix! You got everything from kilts & bagpipers to glittering classical concert pianist to emo goth heavy metal opera to head banging grass roots screamo metal to space age British glam to death metal. Yep – that’s me for you – all over the place. :)

And rewards have never worked for me in anything, writing or otherwise – I’m not motivated by gifts, money, or anything else. If I want to do something, I’ll do it, if not, not amount of rewards will move me.

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Creating Character Profiles (A NaNoWriMo Post)

Monday, October 5, 2009 · Leave a Comment

As is usual for NaNoWriMo – requests have gone out for the link to my ever popular Character Creating Profile. Here it is, as requested:

[quote=Character Information Sheet?]
I know they’re not necessary for writing the rough draft, but does anyone have a character sheet they use to outline they’re characters’ personalities, quirks, et cetra? I had one years and years ago, before I’d even heard about NaNoWriMo, but I can’t find it now.[/quote]

this is the one I’ve always used: http://www.squidoo.com/CharacterProfiles it’s the one that gets used by a lot of NaNoers each year, and usually someone starts a thread just for it in the helpful orgs section. I usually don’t find out about the thread, until I notice NaNo traffic on the web counter. I always found it amazing that so many people were recommending it each year, because it was just something I threw together, sort of on a whim, years ago (this might even be the one you are looking for, don’t know; it’s old enough – it was originally on my really old, ancient writing blog from way, way, way back, when nobody but us uber geeks had blogs – I moved it to this new website about 4 years ago).

I use it to keep track of characters, so that I don’t go saying my MC is allergic to mushrooms in chapter 1, than having him eating mushroom pizza in chapter 5! Pretty much it’s a fill in the blank list, that gives you the basic details of your characters looks, likes, stats, hobbies, etc, to give you a sounding board for when you get stuck during writing. I’ve had lots of writers, write and tell me this chart was a life saver for their novels, which, I thought was pretty neat, seeing how when I originally made this, it was nothing more than me, randomly brainstorming and having and interview with one of my main characters at that time. Since I put a tracker on it in April of 2007 it has had 18,000 unique visitors to it, most of them returning countless times. This is very likely the most trafficked and most popular character creating profile on the internet.

Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

———-
Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Some Thoughts on Writing About Real Places In Fictional Novels (A NaNoWriMo Post)

Sunday, October 4, 2009 · 1 Comment

Today while reading the NaNoWriMo forums, I ran across this question which inspired a rather long winded answer from me. The question and my answer to it follow:

What village is right to base my fictional one off?
I’ve got so much great research on villages, now I’m trying to find a village that seems right to kind of base it off, I feel like I need to for some reason, just put up with me!

I’m looking for the kind of architecture like Lacock and Castle Combe, but Lacock is too big of a village I’m looking for and Castle Combe is too small!

Not looking for coastal villages either, preferably in land.

Thanks in advance!

I’m afraid I’ve never heard of Lacock or Castle Combe, and I’ve no idea where they are in the world either. Uhm, I don’t have any villages to offer for you, sorry. However, I’ll tell you what I do in this sort of situation, because it’s exactly the sort of thing I deal with all the time.

For some reason, I just can’t write about a place until I have actually visited it, walked around the buildings, seen the people, taken note of the types of trees and flowers that are growing – ect, etc. I mean, I can read about the town in books and I can look it up on Google and everything, but somehow it’s not the same as actually standing there. To make this just a bit more difficult, I’m a borderline agoraphobic; I’ve only left the house on a few rare occasions in the past 30 years, and when I do leave the house, I can’t go alone and I can’t go very far. So, this results in some problems, since I can’t write about places I haven’t been, and I can’t leave my yard without a massive panic attack sending me back into my garden.

Well, when it comes to my books and stories, they are pretty much, almost always, set in a small coastal Maine town somewhat cut off from the rest of the world, by the ocean to one side and a forest to the other. Guess where I live? Yeah, in a small coastal Maine town somewhat cut off from the rest of the world, by the ocean to one side and a forest to the other. :)

Problem is, my stories are not always suited to my town. Sometimes I need a bigger town with a lot more bustle. Sometimes I need a smaller town, a lot more secluded. Sometimes I need the house to be a beach cabin right on the sand. Sometimes I need the house to be a castle on a rocky cliff battered by the shore. Sometimes I need a dense forest, sometimes a busy city. Sometimes I need deep dark caves. Sometimes I need sprawling swamplands. Sometimes I need huge deserted cemeteries. But no matter what I need, always is my story set in Old Orchard Beach, Maine, whither it has what I need or not. Always. Whither it’s an accurate description of the town or not, does not matter. I could give the town a different name, say Rockland, and suddenly I find I can not write about it anymore, even though it’s the same setting it was when I was calling it Old Orchard Beach! It’s the weirdest case of Writer’s Block I’ve ever heard of and I can’t explain, it, but it happens every time. If I don’t set my story in Old Orchard Beach, I just can’t write about it.

So, if you read my stories you’d think the real Old Orchard Beach was everything from a big city to a tiny fishing village, with beaches and mountains and thunder-holes and castles. You’d also think it was overrun with werewolves, vampires, phookas, faeries, aliens, ufos, serial killers, ghosts, haunted houses, morbidly depressed emo-goth Edwardian dudes, and psychotic sex crazed mermen. What is the real Old Orchard Beach? The real Old Orchard Beach is nothing like I write it as!

Here is the real Old Orchard Beach, the one I actually live in: When I was a kid, it was a tiny Victorian beach front township, complete with amusement park and a train station, cut off from the world by a 3000 acre forest. By the time I was a teen, out of state developers bought the forest, cut it down and put up skyscraper condos. Today, 30 years later, I live on the last farm, in the middle of the last 26 acre section of forest. There are no mountains or cliffs or castles. The Thunder Hole is real, but it’s not in Old Orchard Beach, it’s about 100 miles north of here, on the Canadian border. Old Orchard Beach had about 2,000 residents when I grew up, most of them farmers and rifle toting lobster men. Today there are 12,000 residents, most of them souvenir shop owners or hotel managers. Voted the World’s Finest Beach (scientifically – meaning it has the world’s tiniest grains of sand; not meaning it’s the best place to visit!) Old Orchard Beach, now gets an average of 2 million tourist visitors each and every summer. Our winters are cold, fierce, and last nearly 8 months, so our tourist season is VERY short, averaging 2 to 3 months. In the winter it is a virtual ghost town, with only a few thousand residents braving off the sub zero winter season. This town has grown and changed a lot over the years. It expanded and evolved. A hundred years ago, it was predominantly black, being a safe haven for escaped slaves, and most of the business owners and town council men were black (a rare thing in the early 1900’s). It’s most famous residents were the Jazz singers Louis Armstrong and Billy Holiday. . . I live 4 houses down from Louis Armstrong’s summer house, and am a 15 minute walk from The Pier (a casino 2 miles off shore and standing in the middle of the ocean) where both Louis and Billy got their start, and had concerts every Saturday night. Today the town is .0001% non-white! What a turn around! My town has a hell of a long history, since it was settled by my pirate great-great-great-great-great grandfather Thomas Rogers in 1657. The land I live on is the oldest in Maine to still be in it’s original family. (Very original, since he married a local Native American girl.)

So, now that I’ve told you all this, how does it help you and what was my point? My point is this – write what you know. It may seem that Lacock and Castle Combe are not just right for your story, but if you are writing fiction – what does it matter whither or not the real village is exactly perfect for your fictional one? So, Lacock is too big and Castle Combe is too small – so what? Combine the two, create a Castle Lacock of Combe instead – a village that combines the best of each and throws out the stuff you don’t need. Take what you know about these two villages and blend them together, and create a village that perfectly suites your needs, out of something you already know about. You will write it best, if you stick to writing what you know, and being a novelist, you can move buildings around to fit your story, you can take a mountain out of France and stick it in a Georgia swamp if you want to! (I grab mountains out of France and drop them smack in the middle of Old Orchard Beach, all the time. I also grab castles out of Scotland, caves out of Tennessee, trees from California, volcanoes from Oregon, and snowstorms out of the North Pole and stick them in Old Orchard Beach, too. Damn – half the time it seems like I’ve condensed the entire United States and squished it into my tiny 7 mile long by 2 mile wide home town!)

The point is, don’t feel that you have to write the village just exactly as it really is. You are a novelist after all – no one expects you to write an accurate travelogue – they expect you to tell a good story, set in a world that seems like the real world, but is a place they would rather be instead. I know it’s not exactly the answer you were looking for, and I don’t have any villages to offer to help you out with, but hopfully this will help you take the villages you like best and find a way to make them the village you are looking for.

Hope this helps you out some. I think all of that made sense – it made sense in my head at least. =/

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Create a Fantasy Realm
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Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Former Overachiever Going Back to Basics and Warning for First Year NaNoWriMo Writers

Sunday, October 4, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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I got into the word count over novel quality bug last year. I know why too. I’d done NaNoWriMo so many times that 50k wasn’t really a challenge for me any more! When November rolled around I looked at it and went: “Ho hum, 50k, been there done that – I need a bigger challenge now.” I know I can do 50k in 30 days. I’ve done it several times. I also knew I could reach 150k because I did it during one year already. So, for 2008, I decided to give myself a challenge – could I reach 200k in 30 days? That meant I would have to write not 1,667 words per day but instead 6,667 word per day! On day one I wrote 12,000 words and I knew from that moment on, 200k was well within my reach.

50k was no longer a challenge. I needed a challenge. I gave myself a challenge. And in the end, I wrote 5 NaNoNovels in 30 days instead of one NaNoNovel in 30 days. I also learned something by the end of NaNo 2008 – I’m never again going to try to juggle 5 novels at once! I only finished one of them, the other 4 ended up a scattered mess of non-connected chapters, and after 30 days of 7k to 12k words per day my hands HURT!

I learned a lesson last year – I can do it if I push myself, but my quality of writing goes right down the toilet. My goal in everything I write, is always to publish it when I get done. Last year, I had written 5 books, but only one was salvageable and went on to seeking publication. The other 4, I now look at as a waste of my time. They were good ideas, but handled badly because I put reaching word count over writing a novel. I don’t want to repeat that again.

This year, I’ve come back to my senses. I reached 238k last year, so I proved to myself I COULD do it if I tried, but I also proved to myself that I don’t really LIKE writing that much all at once. So, this year, I’m sticking with a goal in my own comfort zone – 75k. I know I can do 75k. It’s a good size which most publishers like to see and I won’t have to hurt my hands again, like I did last year. This year I’m going to focus on writing a good story and let word count take a back seat.

The lesson here: Challenge yourself! NaNoWriMo is all about giving yourself a challenge. If this is your first time, than the 50k is a big challenge. After you’ve done it a few years, you may want to try to up the challenge and shoot for a higher word count. The important thing is that you set goals for yourself – goals that you feel you can meet. But don’t hurt yourself doing it!

Also, while I’m thinking about it – at the end of NaNoWriMo 2008, I noticed, my hands hurt, like I said – I’m used to writing daily, but not the mega-huge word counts I did last year, and my daily writing is more like every other day, daily, not every single day, daily. The NaNoWriMo contest, pushes limits.

So, yeah think about what you are doing BEFORE you start. Know ahead of time that those of us who have done and/or are planning to do again, the huge word counts for NaNoWriMo DID NOT start writing yesterday! We have been writing for years! We write daily or near daily! Most of us are already writing 50k a month anyways, and us NaNo to challenge ourselves to bigger word counts than is normal for us. But doing these big goals is NOT for everyone, so don’t do it unless you have had a lot of practice writing a lot of words on a daily basis for several years! 50k is A LOT for someone who is not used to writing, so don’t push yourself past it unless you are physically able to. You don’t want to end up in the hospital or even lose your ability to write at all! Please consider your health when taking on a big word count!

Every year there are members who try to reach 100k, 200k, 300k, 500k, or even more in 30 days. Some of them can and do, do it, but remember – these people are professional writers with years of practice. If you are not a professional writer or do not have the practice – DO NOT ATTEMPT the huge word count goals! This can not be over stated! There are people who have pushed themselves too far doing NaNoWriMo and ended up with Carpel Tunnel Syndrome and in some cases needed surgery to be able to use their hands again. I too have had surgery (on my right hand) as a result of too much writing. Sadly as an artist, this had a terrible affect on my ability to continue my formerly life-like drawings, forcing me to change my art style. (This was many years before NaNoWriMo btw – I had surgery at age 17 because of Carpel Tunnel Syndrome- I always did write more than was good for me.)

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Writing to Publish (and NaNoWriMo Too)

Saturday, October 3, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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I keep seeing folks asking about getting their NaNoWriMo Novels published and asking if at the end of the contest, will NaNoWriMo publish it for them, so I wrote up this:

Nope, NaNo is just a group of people who get together to write, not a publishing house. From what I hear around the forums a lot of folks self-publish via LuLu.com – but only after lots of edits and rewrites and usually a year later.

If you are looking to get published, you need to first figure out which publishing house you want to publish with BEFORE you start plotting your novel, and send for a copy of their submissions guidelines if they are not on their website (most publishers have them listed on their website now). The guidelines will tell you novel length, what they are looking for ect. It will also tell you specifically WHICH editor to send it to, so you don’t just go haphazardly sending it at random to anyone at the publishing house editor or otherwise! For example I’m writing 2 NaNoNovels this year, one of which I plan to later submit to Harlequin. So I went the Harlequin site and their guidelines said this:


[quote=http://www.eharlequin.com/articlepage.html?articleId=542&chapter=0]


Length: 55,000—60,000 words
Senior Editor: Kathleen Scheibling
Associate Editor: Johanna Raisanen
Editorial Assistant: Laura Barth
Editorial Office: Toronto, Canada


American Romance features heartwarming romances with strong family elements. These are stories about the pursuit of love, marriage and family in America today.


A sense of family and community is essential. Secondary characters—such as parents, grandparents, siblings or other relatives, good friends or neighbors—support the hero and heroine in their quest for love, but never overshadow the primary romance. Books must have a distinctly American setting. American Romance favors western settings—from the wide-open ranches of Texas and Wyoming to the small towns of Montana and Oklahoma, to big cities such as Dallas and Phoenix—but our books can be set anywhere in the USA.


Most important is a focus on romance and a clear sense of romantic conflict between the hero and the heroine. There must be realistic obstacles that keep them apart, and overcoming these obstacles is what leads them to a happily ever after.


American Romances can vary in tone, from sweet to humorous to intensely emotional. But there must always be enough drama and tension to keep the pages turning—after all, what could be more dramatic than family?[/quote]

So that means, I have to plan my Romance NaNoNovel to be 55-60k and I have to plan the story plot to match their specifications for this particular line. (Each of their lines has different guidelines).

Than, once you know what your chosen publisher is looking for, you can plan your novel to match. This applies for any writer looking to publish whether you are writing for NaNoWriMo or not. For regular writers (and some NaNoWriters) the writing time line goes something like this:

-One Month To Plan
-One to Two Months To Write
-Two to Four Months to Revise, Edit, & ReWrite
-One Month to Write the Final Draft (usually the 4th or 5th draft by this point)
-One Month to Write Synopsis, Cover Letters, Queries, & Sample Chapters (usually the first 3 chapters)
-Mail Out MSS
-Start Next Book While Waiting 3 to 6 Months For Publisher Reply

Some writers shorten this or overlap it so that they can write 3 or 4 books a year, but most focus on just doing one or two books a year.

So, long story short: DON’T plan on publishing your NaNoNovel come December 1st. What you’ll have at that point is only a first draft, and every book goes through 3, 4, or more drafts before it gets polished up enough to be publishable. If you are coming into NaNoWriMo hoping to publish – have a plan before you start, and plan to spend about 6 months of hard work on your draft AFTER NaNoWriMo ends, BEFORE it’ll be ready to publish. Publishing your NaNoNovel can be done, several WriMoers have done it – but it didn’t happen over night – it took a lot of hard work long after the contest ended.

Hope that helps you out. Good luck with your writing goals!

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What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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Why is my plot trying to become a YA Harry Potter rip-off?

Saturday, October 3, 2009 · Leave a Comment

I’m going good – my plot is moving right along, ideas and characters are snowballing into all sorts of plot snow-bunnies, everything is going great – and than today my plot does all sorts of weird things.

Quick recap – my plot revolves around this megalomaniac super villain who comes in and takes over this small town, planning to make it his “secret headquarters” for his bigger plot of global domination. He figures, no one will think to look for his HQ in a little hick town on the edge of nowhere, everyone will expect him to have some huge fortress in plain sight (because that’s his style). He also figures, no one in “a little hick town in the sticks” is going to be smart enough to defeat him or thwart his plans (yeah – this guy has a big ego problem).

Okay – so the town in the book, is in fact the tiny town in the middle of nowhere that I grew up in – so I know every nook and cranny and can really get into writing up the setting. I also know the locals pretty well and know that they just HATE outsiders barging in and will not stand for this guy’s attempt at taking over and setting up HQs here. They are NOT the backwards idiots he expects them to be.

So far so good. My problem is, I’ve yet to figure out WHO my hero is. I don’t have a main character or any of his side kicks yet. My story as I’ve planned it gets pretty dark and bloody, and is very much a horror story. Too horror to be considered a Young Adult novel. So I’ve been planning on an adult aged hero team (hero plus two friends).

Than this morning rolls around and I’m working on my plot and suddenly out of no where I’ve got these kids (about 16 years old -ish) and ideas about all sorts of ways they can defeat the bad guy, and I’m going – this is great! And than it hits me – it’s starting to sound an awful lot like Potter and crew going after Voldemort. :( Than I’m like – “Wait a minute! I wasn’t writing YA, what are these teenagers doing battling the villain?”

I need to steer clear of having Harry Potter-type personalities for my heroes. I think that’s the problem right there – it started sounding like it was Harry, Hermione, and Ron doing all these things. It was like they jumped out of the Potter books and into my plot. :( Not so much the plot itself being Potter-ish, but the characters acting like they were Harry, Hermione, and Ron. I don’t want to sound like I grabbed them, gave them new names, and set them in my plot, but just the way I was writing about their character bios – it seemed like that’s what I had done.

Of course maybe I SHOULD write YA, because tat’s what I read, and doesn’t every one always say to write what you read? What do I read – well, Harry Potter of course, and The Three Investigators, Bunnicula series, Jane Eyre, Edgar Alan Poe, Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys, Lemony Snickets, Alfred Hitchcock’s Young Reader series, Bruce Coville, Betty Ren White, Kieth Laumer, James Blish, lots of random assorted single title books off the YA paperback rack of my local library – I rarely ever read adult fiction. . . uhm, yeah, YA books is all I ever read, maybe I should try writing YA after all?

It’s odd, I read one and write the other. All my books have always been adult books, usually very adult M rated books, not once have I written YA. It never occurred to me before that I am writing the complete opposite of what I’m reading. Weird, actually. Writing YA is so very not my style. I’m thinking now though, maybe I should give it a try seeing how this one is trying to go that road.

So my question is, SHOULD I go with it and let my teenage characters jump right in and battle the villain? or should I continue searching for older heroes for my book? Should I change my focus and make this a YA novel? And how do I come up with ways for my characters to defeat the villain, without making my readers think – “This is soooo Harry Potter”?

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What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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Editing and Drafts
Create a Fantasy Realm
Advice For NaNoWriters!
Creating Character Profiles
Are You A Renegade A Writer?
How To Become a Better Writer
The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
Improving your writing with what you read.
Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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My NaNovel 2009 – What genre is it?

Friday, October 2, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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What genre is it?

I’m calling it Steampunk. I think, what I’m planning to write, will classify as Steampunk.

I think it is going to be Steampunk-Horror, but at this point in the planning it’s too early to say. It could go more into straight Fantasy leaving Horror behind, and it could go more modern than Steampunk. We’ll see once November gets rolling around, which way it turns out, but for the time being, I’m calling it a Steampunk-Horror until it tells me otherwise.

Is it bad that I have never read or written Steampunk before?

I’m a huge fan of Edgar Alan Poe and H.G.Wells, and I want to create a story that combines both of their styles, in the same sort of setting/era as their stories, but at the same time taking place in the present day. You see, I want to use a real town, which is utterly perfect for my novel to take place in, and was in existence in the 1800’s, but was wiped out by a fire in 1964, so the town today is nothing like it was than – none of the original buildings are left, though most of them were *rebuilt*. A lot of stuff that is in the town today (the amusement park rides, for instance) did not exist in the 1800’s, but I want to use them in my novel. I want to story set in the 1800’s, but I want all sorts of modern things too. My answer to that, was to throw everything in the pot together and write an alternate version of this town. So, what I ended up with, was a novel set today, in a real town, but in an alternate reality where it’s like most of the 1800’s lifestyle (cloths, theology, technology, etc.) is pretty much still here too. From my understanding of what Steampunk is, I think, my novel is going to be very much what could be classified as Steampunk.

Is it?

But my question is whether Steampunk is Fantasy, Sci-Fi, or Adventure?

Admittedly, I’m somewhat new to Steampunk as a genre (if you don’t count the fact that I’ve read nothing but 1800’s sci-fi and horror for the past 30 years, that is), so my thoughts on this could be a bit skewed. I’ve never really thought of Steampunk as a genre in and of itself, but rather as a setting, in which any genre could be set. In other words, my feeling is that there are such things as: Steampunk Fantasy, Steampunk Horror, Steampunk Adventure, Steampunk Science Fiction, Steampunk Romance, Steampunk Murder Mystery, etc. etc. etc. I wonder, is there such a thing as Steampunk Chick Lit too?

I think any genre can be done as Steampunk, depending on which direction you want to take your story.

Personally, when I think Steampunk, I think of a modern day world, that for whatever reason, still lives predominantly in the lifestyle of a historical era. Sort of an alternate reality sort of thing, I guess. As for timeline, maybe I’m lose-er than others, but I see it as from the mid-1700’s to the 1940’s. I guess that goes a bit before and after the “steam era”, but that’s the way I see it anyways.

That’s what I meant earlier, about not being sure if I’ll stay strictly in Steampunk once I get started writing. You see, I’m setting my novel in the present day, but I’m also assuming that in *this* present day, things are quite a bit similar to what they were in the 1800’s. So, it’s not like I took things from our time and stuck them in the 1880’s, but rather, I took the 1800’s and stuck them in our times. Things like cars, I don’t think will exist in my world, people will still be using horses for the most part, or walking. On the other hand, I plan on having an airship of sorts (still designing it and trying to figure out it it’s the *only one* or if they are like cars and everybody has one. Not sure how that’ll go yet)

I think the ship, most likely, will be an actual ship – you know, like a pirate ship; only it can leave the water and fly through the sky as well. Not sure how it’ll do that yet, but I’ve always wanted a flying pirate ship, so I’m going to try it out and see what happens. I think, in the end, it sort like a space age science fiction time, but as though it was science fiction written by a person living in the 1850’s. You know, before cars and rockets were invented, so the *author* would be thinking in terms of water ships in the future. That sort of thing.

And zeppelins, I want to write about zeppelins. Is that weird? I’ve always wanted a zeppelin or a blimp, or some sort of big funny lightweight ship I could fly around town in. Ever since I was about 4 years old and I saw a blimp, I’ve wanted one. It’s one of those things, you know, when someone asks you: “If you had a million dollars what would you buy?” and my answer would be: “Why a zeppelin, of course!” Yep, I’m weird. I know. I was a weird kid and I grew up into a weird adult. It helps that I grew up in an almost Amish family, and have never NOT worn 1800’s cloths too. My clothes scare people, I never understood it, because it was the way my family dressed. I was 27 years old, before I had contact with people outside of my family, so I wasn’t aware that my clothing style had gone out of style some 200 odd years earlier. It was quite a bit of culture shock for me, but, you can see why I find it so very difficult to set anything I write, in a modern world, that does not live as the 1800 world.

I have a few odd idea running around in my head right now, things I would *like* to use, but am not sure yet how they well fit in my plot, so not 100% sure I’ll use each of them yet.

First off, I have this idea about an air ship, that is sort of part seafaring pirate ship and part zeppelin, so that it can go by air or water. I’m not sure yet how it is powered, but it has the ability to freeze solid every thing it passes over – turning the ocean to ice and such. Well, I suppose since it’s Jack Frost’s air-ship-boat-thing, you could say it was magic powered to some extent – though I still haven’t worked that all out yet. Maybe I should write up some sort of *magic system* so I know what magic can and can not do in my universe? I don’t want the answer to always be that magic can solve everything – there’s no real challenge for my characters if I did that. More like magic is there, and people who know how (have learned/studied) can use it to varying degrees, but most people just don’t know how to do anything with it – so it’s like, only a few “magical person’s” really know how to use it – Jack Frost for example – only Jack Frost has gone power crazy with it and is using it to freeze everything, sort of just because he can and no one knows how to stop him – which he sees as making him the most powerful person alive.

I still haven’t worked out how Jack goes from ordinary magical person who creates winter, to megalomaniac magical person gone mad. Or who it is that is going to step in to stop him, or how. It seems like it should be another *magical type* but than again, it might be better if a regular, non-magical type stops him – possibly using some sort of weird ice-melting steampunk gadget? Not sure yet.

In any case, I definitely need to build up laws for my magic system, I forgot to do that.

I have another idea for a merry-go-round which I want to do something really creepy and scary, but I’m not sure yet what it does. Maybe it freezes time? Maybe people get on, but don’t get off? Maybe it’s a portal to another dimension? Maybe it’s a time machine? I haven’t decided yet what it’ll do or how I’ll use it. I can just see clouds of dry ice wafting off the floor as it turns, filling the park grounds with an icy fog that freezes those who walk through it.

I also had an idea about a weird flying motorcycle, that is somehow powered by ice.

I was also thinking about this frozen ghost train, that crashed during a blizzard and everyone froze to death, but now years later it comes rolling through town in the dead of night, all coated with ice and snow, and instead of clouds of black smoke, it puffs out clouds of dry-ice fog. And all of its passengers are these sort of frost-ghost-zombies. The train was my first idea. Last August I kept thinking “I’m writing about a ghost circus train this year” but that’s all I had. Just the ghost train, nothing else. I think the ghost train is probably going to be a big part of the story, and the other stuff more background side things. I seem to be putting most of my focus on the train than the other things. I kept seeing the ghosts as very cold and icy, and one thing lead to another.

You can tell I’ve got this whole ice theme going here right? I want all my thingys to be powered by ice or to give off ice or turn things into ice. I guess mine will be more Icepunk than Steampunk. LOL! But hey, ice turns to steam as it melts right? Ice turns to water as it melts… yeah, but where does steam come from? Evaporated water! :)

So, I’m calling it Steampunk Horror for the time being. Of course, than I’ve got the whole Horror bit going too. I’m still calling it Horror at this point, but I wonder if maybe, it’s really, more of a Dark Fantasy instead? Maybe I should change my NaNoGenre setting?

Hopefully, I’ll have everything worked out between now and November.

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NaNoWriMo, Jack Frost, and The DARES Thread

Friday, October 2, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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NaNoWriMo, Jack Frost, and The DARES Thread

What would NaNoWriMo be without The DARES Thread? In a word, it wouldn’t. One of the first topics to ever be created on the NaNoForums, The DARES Thread has remained a steady and popular part of the NaNoWriMo competition. The theory behind it is simple – play a game of Truth or Dare with your characters. Your character has chosen Dare over Truth, and now you as the author must come up with a dare for your character to carry out. The DARES Thread is a place for NaNo contestants to leave dares for each others characters. You go through the list until you find a dare appropriate for your character, and than ad a scene to your story with your character carrying out the dare.

I usually grab a dozen or so dares and scatter them throughout my NaNoNovels. It’s a traditional thing that makes a NaNoNovel stand out as somewhat different from a regular novel, making it like a game. I’m currently seeking out dares, as I do every October. As I find new dares, I’ll come back here and add them to my list. As the month of November rolls along, we’ll see how many of them I actually use.

Dare = The dare itself.
BP = Bonus Points: An extra idea for the dare.
DBP = Double Bonus Points: Going beyond the dare itself
TBP = Triple Bonus Points: Going above and beyond the dare
QBP = Quadruple Bonus Points: Taking the dare to the point of utter insanity

NaNoDare #1:

Found in the 2008 DARES Archive: (link not currently available)

Dare: Have a Death Scene in every chapter.
BP: If it always involves a main character.
TP: If it doesn’t involve a secret evil organization
QP: If your MC starts to not notice everyone dying.
My Soul: If all of them are ridiculous deaths, such as Death by Tuna Sandwich.



30 Ways to Die in 30 Days


Since I’m doing sort of supernatural villains, I’ve got some supernatural ideas to throw out:

My first thought is supernatural beings kill using supernatural methods. What need have they for using their hands or carrying weapons? They are supernatural, so give them super powers to match.

Maybe one “shoots” lightening bolts and another “shoots” fire, and another “shoots” ice/hail. That makes for some crispy bad guys who cross their paths. :)

Shouldn’t they be able to cause the earth to open up and swallow their victims? (an earthquake maybe? crush him with his own house?) Or what about tornadoes that target the bad guy. (Flatten him under a car?) Boulders falling from the sky. Flames shooting up like a geyser out of the sidewalk. Branches tearing themselves off trees and flying through the air, skewering the guy. A house cat suddenly grows to the size of a elephant and eats him. His cup of coffee suddenly starts boiling, turns to acid and melts him from the inside out. You know: Normal acts of nature doing very unnormal things because they are being controlled by supernatural powers.

I find such things far more disturbing than, if the Jack just walked up to the guy and gutted him, because any mugger on the street can do that, and your guy could try to fight back in a face to face confrontation, but who but a supernatural villain can call down the very mountains to fall on your head – and how can you fight back against a force like that, especially if you can’t see the force that is attacking you thus don’t know where to run to escape it? This goes into the realms of psychological terror, AND each of those methods, can be written to be very dark, disturbing, an bloody if you set about to describing things in detail.

I made a thread about this on NaNoWriMo, you can brainstorm about ways to kill characters there if you’d like.


Well, since I write my NaNoNovels a chapter a day and the contest runs for 30 days, that means I’ll have 30 mini-chapters, which in turn means that if I’m going to use this dare, I need to come up with 30 characters to kill off and 30 different ways to kill them off!
HELP! I need ideas for unique ways to kill off my characters!
Got a great idea for how to kill a character off? I made a poll that allows folks to ad their own answers to the poll, so you can both vote on answers and add new answers at the same time.http://www.squidoo.com/NaNoWriMo-2009#module60652542 Please check it out and add your idea to the list – who knows, I may end up using it! Here are a few ideas I copied from the 2006 Dare Thread Archives, not sure if I’ll use them or not, but they may help you guys out:
  •  1-Have a character die in a freak trombone accident.
  •  2-Include a polar bear somewhere that a polar bear absolutely would not be. BP if polar bears kills someone.
  •  3-Murder them with a high heeled shoe.
  •  4-Death by pencil.
  •  5-Death by teacup. ;)
  •  6-Have them die alphabetically.
  •  7-BP if all 30 of them are wearing red “jumper” shirts when they die.
  •  8-Don’t forget to bring your towel: Have one of your characters always carrying his towel. Somehow carrying the towel causes his death.
  •  9-Have a character exclaim, “There is no spoon!” to which the responce is “There is no death”, and than he dies.
  •  10-Kill a mime. Bonus points if this is followed by the line “A mime is a terrible thing to waste.”
  •  11-Have everyone constantly thinking fondly of another, dead character. The catch is that every time they mention how s/he died, the cause is completely different. For example, “Yeah, we never saw that trombone accident coming”, and then two pages later, “Yo
  •  12-Have one of your characters meet their maker after a gruesome and tragic death involving Lady Bugs.
  •  13-Death by penguins. Bonus points if it’s completely random.
  •  14-Have one of your character’s death involve the following: a wedding (or funeral), Donald Trump, a motorcycle, a stapler, and the character’s great aunt.
  •  15-Include the famous last words, “Oh, they could never hit us from-” *SPAT* *BANG* *ETC.*
  •  16-And of course, the very popular, “Gone without a trace” death. Where one of the characters simply disappears one page without any notice from the other characters. Bonus points if the character was set up to be an important part of the plot.
  •  17-Feature a character who is killed because of their self-appointed mission in life is to correct the grammar of the posts left on the walls of public bathrooms.
  •  18-Have your MC try threaten to kill another character with a spoon. When asked why a spoon, the MC must answer with “because it would be painful”.
  •  19-Have a character that is prone to accidentally setting random objects on fire (waste baskets, slippers, dish rags, etc.) accidentally kill himself.
  •  20-One of your characters carries a snake-headed walking stick sharpened to a deadly point, which is used to kill another character.
  •  21-Include a llama in some way. Also, an acorn and a palm tree. That is all. :)
  •  22-At some point in your novel, have a character seriously consider how to kill a person using cutlery and/or kitchen implements that you wouldn’t normally consider to be deadly weapons.
  •  23-Imagine being stampeded by letter openers. That almost begs a death by paper cuts or homicidal paper clips that stalk teh night.
  •  24-Have a police officer called to the scene of a grisly, yet bizarre homicide – the murder weapon: a plastic spork.
    (The classic “spork dare” as originally debuted in 2006)
  •  25-Include a terrible accident involving a rubber chicken.
  •  26 – Use the quote “never put a sock in a toaster” as a reason for a character’s death.
  •  27 -A character is killed by a flying evidence box.
  •  28 – The Traveling Shovel of Death Strikes Again! *evil grin*



  • NaNoDare #2:


    Found in the 2006 DARES Archive

    Dare: Have an entire scene spent picking flowers.
    BP: Picking flowers somehow is vital to the plot.
    DBP: If the MC uses them to defeat the bad guy.
    TBP: If the bad guy uses them to defeat the MC.
    QBP: If everyone is screwed by said flowers.

    This one is perfect for Jack. I on’t know why, but I’ve always seen Jack as sort of “afraid” of flowers. I can just see Jack obsessively freezing every flower he sees. Now if I could just figure out how Jack could be defeated with flowers, I’ll be all set.



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    Advice For NaNoWriters!
    Creating Character Profiles
    Are You A Renegade A Writer?
    How To Become a Better Writer
    The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
    What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
    Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
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    NaNoWriMo 2009 – Your Thoughts on Where This Could Go . . .

    Friday, October 2, 2009 · 1 Comment

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    This post is to ask for ideas, but also for any one else to ask questions on, if you have got some sort of evil ice villain, winter wizard, ice king, snow queen, etc, lurking around in your novel.

    Okay, my novel this year is a horror story about Jack Frost. However, my research of Jack tells my that 99% of the time, he’s a cute cuddly not really so bad – bad guy destined for children’s stories and Saturday morning cartoons. And I can get ideas from all that, sure, but cartoon character Jack’s are never “bad” enough and suffer from the all too cliched bad guy suffers change of heart and turns good.

    Well, my Jack is along the lines of a psychotic comic book super villain type bad guy (influenced heavily by Batman’s, Joker.) You know, the type that DOESN’T turn good at the end of the story. The type that isn’t defeated once and for all, just defeated for now and threatens to return worse than before.

    I’m not sure yet who the other icy folks will be, but for my story, Jack Frost is like an evil Ice King of sorts. The way I see Jack (my version of him), he’s this evil frozen overlord with a troop of frosty evil minions, and these bad guys take to killing people in “chilling” ways. I’ve already made a NaNo thread to throw around ideas for how to kill off characters: a>30 Ways to Kill 30 People in 30 Days but here, I’m not looking for ideas on how to kill folks.

    What I’m looking for on this thread, is, cold, icy ways to make Jack and his minions spine tinglingly chilling. :) So, are you writing about icy-frosty-snowy-wintery characters? What ways are you using to make them more evil? How do you make characters who are usually seen in nursery rhymes seem prime evil and how do you make them terrifying?

    What would you find most terrifying if you were to meet an ice villain face to face? What would scare you and why?


    What would you find most terrifying if you were to meet an ice villain face to face? What would scare you and why?

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    The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
    What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
    Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
    Improving your writing with what you read.
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    How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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    Villain as a PoV characters? Can it be done?

    Friday, October 2, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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    Villain as a PoV characters? Can it be done?

    I’m having a character and plotting problem. I have an idea (not really a full plot yet – but November will fix that), and I have a place (the town I grew up in, of which I know every nook and cranny of), I have the backdrop people (nameless folks in the sidelines who’s sole purpose is to be killed off by the villain), and of course I have the villain (a nursery rhyme character gone comic book megalomaniac) and his evil minions (a traveling side show-circus of frozen ghosts).

    My villain is well planned (I spent years creating him) and is life like and three dimensional. I know what he wants and what he’ll do to reach his goals. I know he’s about to land unannounced in this town and pretty much turn it upside down. I know that somewhere, somehow, someone (my hero/main character???) will come along and figure out how to defeat him.

    And there’s my problem – I have no main character! I think I want three main characters (three best friends who for whatever reason take it upon themselves to defeat this guy), but I’ve yet to figure out who they, what they look like, or more importantly HOW they will defeat the villain.

    I think as it goes now, the villain is going to be the point of view character, but than I wonder – CAN a villain be a PoV character? Stories should build up around the MC right? But does the MC always have to be the hero? My story is building up, but it is building up around the villain and as yet, no hero has come forward. Does that mean that my villain (and not my hero) is the main character?

    Traditionally, the bad guy gets defeated at the end, and is no longer seen in the last chapter of a novel; the last chapter being reserved for tying up loose ends and showing the heroes living happily ever after (more or less). Can the novel be written through the eyes of the guy who will be defeated at the end? (He’ll still be alive at the end, the hero isn’t going to kill him off, just stop him from succeeding in his evil plan.) Can a novel end, not showing the hero riding off into the sunset, but rather showing the villain going off to sulk in his lair instead?

    I know publishers always want the HEA (Happily Ever After) endings, but I’m just really not a HEA writer! It’s been the major stumbling block to my getting published, actually. Editor’s are constantly telling me: “This is great, but could you change the ending?” Are you crazy? Me? Change the ending? I’m not your sunshine and happiness writer! I don’t let my heroes get everything they ever wanted – heck, they are lucky if they are still alive by the time the book ends! I love Poe’s morbid endings, and I love writing Poe style morbid endings. I get sick of every book I read, ALWAYS having a HEA ending. I get to the end and I wish – just once, why can’t the bad guy win? Just once, why can’t the hero give up and say “To heck with it, save yourself.” Just once I’d like to see a stumbling block fall in front of the hero and he has to end his quest WITHOUT reaching his goal! ACK! Why don’t more publishers give us this? I mean, it’s not like us writers are not writing this stuff. Sure we are, we just can’t get publishers to publish anything without an HEA ending. :(

    End rant.

    Okay, back to my NaNoNovel of the year. Well, my novel this year, I’m planning to get published. By December I want to have a draft worthy of editing and polishing, so that by next summer I’ll have an MSS I can send out to publishers. Here’s my problem – I’ve done this before, but my endings are always either hero dies, bad guy wins, heroine dies and hero goes mad with grief, or some other such ending of gloom and despair. I LIKE writing endings like that, but publishers don’t want to publish those types of endings. So, I’m torn between writing what I’m good at or writing what publishers want.

    Well, this year, my story, as usual, revolves heavily around the villain. It’s very likely that he’ll be the MC and the PoV character. It’s also very likely that he will defeat the hero and gain global domination. As it’s going right now (in this early planning stage) it looks like my hero is doomed to fail on his quest, and me the author is going to sit back and let it happen. In other words, I WANT MY HERO TO FAIL! No matter what he does or how hard he tries, I’m just not going to let him win. Is that bad?

    Anyone ever seen the movie “Quarantine” (It’s a zombie movie that well, let’s just say does not go quite the way the hero expected.) or “Saw”? Yeah, that’s what I’m talking about. Those kind of endings. Bad guy wins. No matter how many loops the hero jumps through – bad guy still wins – game over – hero loses. I like to call them *Twilight Zone Endings* because it happened so often, that the bad guy wins in The Twilight Zone. So, that’s the way my story is going.

    Of course, it also looks like my plot is turning into sort of a zombie apocalypse here too. Whoops! I didn’t plan on that!

    Can anyone recommend any books where the villain/bad guy is a PoV character? I’d like to read some to get an idea of how others have handled writing from the PoV of the bad guy, but so far I can’t think of any books writing from the villain’s PoV. Preferably stuff that makes you think: Quarantine, Saw, Poe, Joker, or Twilight Zone (since this is the way my story is leaning quite heavily at this point.)

    I know Batman comic books are somethings written from the villain’s PoV and it’s not uncommon to see Gotham through the Joker’s eyes or to see the Joker taking the lead in the stories while pushing Batman into the sidelines. And of course, though he’s defeated in the end of the story, the Joker is never fully defeated, he always comes back a few issues later. But this is the only example I can think of, of a villain taking the lead, and a comic book is not exactly the same as a novel. Are there any novels that do this?


    Is there any one else who has or plans to write using the villain/bad guy as their MC and PoV character?

    So many questions, I know, but it’s just that I’ve never seen a novel written from a villain PoV before and outside of comic books I don’t know of any villains ever being used as a main character before. Let me know if you know of any, please.

    Also I need to find my heroes (main characters???) but so far they are doing a good job of hiding from me. If any one has any ideas, I’d love to hear them.

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    Jack Frost – A History – NaNoWriMo Research

    Thursday, October 1, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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    Look out! Look out!
    Jack Frost is about!
    He’s after your fingers & toes!
    ~~Cecily Pike

    I’m going to bore you a bit with some random history of Jack Frost and my own connection to him. Why? Well, because this blog is for brainstorming for my NaNovel and what better way to do that than to randomly chatter about the history of my main character?

    Jack Frost and How I Met Him

    My obsession with Jack started early. I only attended school for 3 years, being pulled out of school at age 8. However, in my short time at school, one thing went over big with me, and that was stage acting. Our school had 4 plays staged each year, and I made it my goal to be in every one of them – and I was. My photographic memory meant I had the highly unusual ability to recite pages of lines from memory after only seeing them a couple of times, and this unique talent got me cast in major roles of every play.

    My preference however was always to play villains. Unfortunately for me, villains rarely had long lines, and my memory skills put me in roles where I had to do a lot of talking (strange considering my selective mutism in later years.) Only once, did I get to play a villain, and I was chosen for that part, not for my ability to remember lines, but rather due to my outlandish clothen style, which meant I had access to the proper costume for the part. For this silent mime style acted part, it was all about costume and an actor who could pull off a lot of glitter and glam. Boy can I do that. :) I scare people, not just today as an adult – but way back than in first grade – my chosen style of dress always scared people. But that year – it was my outlandish outfits that got me the part in a play that would forever change my view of book and movie villains and influence much of my later life.

    I was 6 years old and the villain was Jack Frost in a reinterpretation of Oscar Wilde’s The Selfish Giant.

    Jack Frost has long been my favorite character, be it a holiday character, a fairy tale character, a book character, or a movie character. 





    For those of you who don’t know me well, I’m a big Liberace fan. To say I was a huge Liberace fan, is an understatement. One look at me tells you, I’m more obsessed with Liberace than any other obsession. There is a reason people walk on the other side of the road on what few occasions I leave my agoraphobic state and step out side in public. I’m a HUGE Liberace fan. I started dressing like Liberace at around 4 years old. I started my fandom very young.

    So here was this teacher, with this idea of what she wanted her Jack Frost to look like and here was this student ready made for the part. Remember, when I was 6 years old, Liberace` was still alive and well and prancing across the stage on TV every morning, and I was glued to the TV never to miss a single episode of the Liberace Show. My clothes mirrored his. Liberace was than and still today, my eternal idol, and I always did dress like my hero. The teacher whom had written the play had this vision of a silver sequined Jack Frost, and who better suited to playing the part, than the school’s biggest (and only) Liberace fan? I had almost no lines at all, but boy did I have a costume!

    I guess you could say, like nearly everything else in my life, you could blame my Jack Frost obsession on my love of Liberace. In any case, the cloths make the man, and I love a guy dripping in sequins. Since my first introduction to Jack Frost was to see him as an evil fairy tale version of Liberace, it was instant love at first sight.

    The Jack Frost as I played him in the school play, was a Winter Faery, who came to the gardens to tuck in the summer Faeries, under a blanket of snow, and tell the flowers it was time to sleep for the winter. This Jack, loved children so left quickly, telling the Spring Faeries to awake the flowers so the children would have a place to play.

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    One winter, while tucking the Flower Faeries in, he sees a Giant chasing the children away. The terrified children no longer dare to come out of their houses to play, so the angry Jack unleashes his wrath on the land, with a blizzard unlike anything the world had ever seen. Buried in his castle the Giant who loved to garden, no longer can tend his flowers. Winter lasts for seven years, and darkness swept over the land, freezing everything in it’s path. Jack chases away the sun, the Spring, and the Flower Faeries, allowing only Wind and Snow to enter. Together Wind, Snow, and Jack torment the giant. Only after the giant repents and allows the children to play outside again, does Jack allow Spring to return.

    This is one of the oldest stories of Jack Frost, though there are stories older, and no doubt is the story that inspired C.S.Lewis to write his Lion, the Witch, and The Wardrobe, which tells a vaguely similar story of the White Witch casting eternal Winter across the land. In any case, this story was the first Jack Story I ever heard, and I got right into it, by playing Jack himself in our school play version of it, so it was this version of Jack that I came to think of when I think of Jack Frost.

    Over the next few years, I looked for every story, picture, poem, book, and movie I could find about Jack Frost, and I was faced with something else: this guy is hard to find. Mentions of him anywhere are few and far between. When he does show up, he’s a minor character with barely a cameo role.







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    Jack Frost the Cartoon Villain

    The next time I saw Jack it would be in the claymation movie The Year Without a Santa Claus, where he is portrayed as part of the evil Miser Brother duo. This movie opened my eyes to all new possibilities for my beloved Jack – namely that now I saw him as some sort of an ice god who rules over winter from a frozen castle of ice hidden deep in the North Pole.

    Twilit Wooded River in the Snow

    Next time I found Jack it was in Keenan Wynn’s Winter Warlock version of him, from Santa Claus is Coming to Town, another claymation movie.

    This interpretation of him, brought to light the fact that this guy was damn mean, but that, he wasn’t always mean – long ago he had been a mortal human who had only wanted love and friendship but was meant with cruelty and unkindness, and so turned his heart cold to the world and set out to freeze it, than created the North Pole as his hide out. This of course would result in him playing a roll in Santa Claus having a place to escape to and thus how Santa Claus was able to build a magic village and toy shop that no one could see.

    So, now I had new ideas about Jack – who I now saw as not only having power to control the weather, but also, a wizard of sorts with other strange powers as well.

    Hoar Frost and Road by Butchers Dam, near Alexandra, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand

    NOTE TO SELF

    Once upon a time Jack Frost was known as Odin . . .

    From Odin to Jack: A Short History of Jack Frost

    As the years came and went, I would find Jack Frost hiding in many places, but only in the two movies mentioned above, was he ever found to have any sort of leading role, and even in those two movies his on screen time was minimal at best. (Okay, yeah, I know, he’s in other kids movies and cartoons, but the other ones always show him as a good hero figure and I’m looking for bad guy versions of him.)

    My luck with books was not much better, outside of The Selfish Giant, Jack Frost was rarely seen in books, and usually only ever mentioned in passing and not actually seen at all.

    A few assorted winter poems and Christmas songs mentioned him now and again, but as usual, it was nothing to write home about – so to speak.


    Frustrated with fruitless searches for Jack in books and movies, I turned my search elsewhere and found that folklore, myths, and legends are where you find the real stories about Jack.

    As it turns out Jack is an ancient character from Norse mythology, who once upon a time was known as Odin. In his early days Jack Frost was Odin, a fearsome god of winter whose servants were the Frost Giants and Ice Giants and prime contender was the black hearted trickster, Loki. His early incarnation was your basic viking warlord complete with big long bushy beard, huge weapons of war, and big Conan muscles. He later became known as Woden and was given a day of the week as his own personal festival day: Wednesday.

    By the Celtic times Odin/Woden began to be called Jokul Frosti which basically means The Icicle King or The Frost King. During this time he was sometimes called the son of the Nordic wind god Kari. He also had a change of appearance, looking less fierce viking god and more Father Christmas Druid Wizard. The name Jack Frost is a direct English translation from Jokul Frosti and where his current name comes from, but this still is not the Jack Frost we know today. Jokul Frosti The Icicle Frost King, was more wise man than god. He had become a less scary warrior and a more friendly father figure. He was now looked upon as, and often called: Old Man Winter. This version of him was the old man whom Baby New Year had turned into by the year’s end. He died the last day of each year, and was born again the first day of the next year.

    Hoar Frost and Road by Butchers Dam, near Alexandra, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand

    In later Celtic times, he would change once again, due to the arrival of the Christian invaders. Inspired by romantic stories of martyrs and saints, most especially a recently killed gift bearing Turkish Saint named Nicholas, followers of Odin turned Old Man Winter, began to call him by various versions of Saint Nicolas, most common among them to rise out above the rest would of course be *gasps* Santa Claus.

    Through studying the history of Jack Frost it was an amazing discovery to learn that, the two men, seen so often as bitter rivals in Christmas movies, were in fact one and the same person! Santa Claus IS Jack Frost! It was in colonial times that we would see the rise of Father Christmas, a man robed in blue with brown fur trim, fur skin cape, body coated with ice, long white beard flowing to the ground, and a bag of toys on his back. From here the story splits and evolves depending on which culture/country is telling it.

    It’s not until the Victorian times, do we see Old Man Winter separated into two unique individuals. At some point, it seems around the 1850’s, Saint Nicolas became Santa Claus, the toy toting jolly old elf wearing red furs; while Father Christmas became Jack Frost the smaller and much younger, blue clad sprite who turned everything he touched to ice. From this point on we see the Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde side of the Old Man Winter stories, with Santa Claus being the infinity good Dr, Jekyll to Jack Frost’s infinity evil My. Hyde.

    And that is how Odin went from Norse God to a duo of Christmas fairy tale characters, which brings us to the Jack Frost as we know him today – a little, cold hearted, blue guy who spends his time painting ice on windows, freezing blades of grass with his breath, and plotting his revenge against the infinity more popular Santa Claus .

    Snowy Pass

    Jack Around The World

    The whole Odin to Jack Frost version of him, is of course the English version of him, but Jack possibly predates Odin, and it questionable whether or not he actually was Odin or whether he served Odin. Stories are not clear on this issue, because well, Jack as we know him today – the elf-sprite-faerie being, was not around back than anyways. The elfish version of Jack really was not seen before Thomas Nast drew a picture of him in 1864.

    And even in Nast’s drawing he is called “General Jack Frost” and depicted as a war lord riding a frozen ice horse and wielding an icicle sword. He didn’t really go all pixie until much later when Jules Bass and Arthur Rankin Jr. got a hold of him in the 1950’s – 1970’s and made all those Christmas claymation movies, nearly all of which featured Jack Frost as a minor character. One of the Rankin and Bass movie, Jack Frost, stared Jack Frost as the leading roll. Thanks to Rankin and Bass Jack is now in constant competition with Santa Claus or working with or for Santa Claus.


    But outside of the English versions, Jack Frost, takes a different roll. Traditionally Jack has nothing to do with Christmas at all. Jack is all about winter. While modern American tales have him an artist painting ice on windows and making plants look pretty and glittery, old folklore of Russia shows us a very different Jack. The Russian tales of Jack are ancient and no one really knows when or how they got started. This Jack was usually see with a wife. He was cold and blew terrible icy windstorms when he was angry. She was made of snow and scatted feathers to earth (which turned into snowflakes) in order to sooth her husband fierce temper. Blizzards came about when they were both angry. Together they controlled the weather and used wind, ice, hail, and snow to control and enslave humans. This version of Jack was not a friendly painter, but a terrible destroyer who brought down food crops with a single breath, froze men to death during storms, and trapped travelers in blizzards. When he is not killing humans with his cold breath, he id a blacksmith who builds chains out of ice and wraps them around plants to pull them down.

    Russia’s version of Jack is typical of nearly all non-American versions of him – fierce, spiteful, cruel, destructive, and taking great delight in causing pain and suffering. Traditional Jack is not well liked, he is feared, people do not look forward to his visits.

    “General Jack Frost” by Thomas Nast


    Jack Becomes a Disney Villain

    I think my favorite interpretation of Jack was when Jack Frost became a Disney Villain as portrayed by Martin Short in Santa Clause 3 The Escape Clause.

    Everyone who knows me, knows I’m an uber major Disneyaniac. Yes, that IS a real word – it has the same meaning as Trekkie (a Star Trek geek) or Whovian (a Doctor Who geek).

    A Disneyaniac is a person who suffers from server Disneyania (Disney mania and yes, that’s a real word too), and obsessively collects and hordes Disney memorabilia to the point of utter insanity. Disneyania is an actual, though uncommonly mentioned, psychological illness, that you can be diagnosed with – it’s a form of OCD which involves uncontrollably hording Disney memorabilia. My Disneyania is somewhat monumental in that it’s nearing the point of breaking a Guinness World Record – yep, I’m not going to stop until I break that record either. That is my goal.

    Of course, Jack Frost being my favorite character and me suffering from diagnosed Disneyania, means I nearly went through the roof when Disney announced they were turning Jack Frost into a Disney Villain! And to top it off, after years of cartoon characters – Jack Frost was at long last going to be a live action villain. YAY!

    Martin Short was already one of my favorite actors, due to his early roles as Franque, the Fairy Godfather, and Mab’s elf assistant. His later role as one of my all time favorite book characters, The Mad Hatter, boosted him way up the line, to making my top ten list of the best actors, but it wasn’t until his portrayal of Jack Frost as a Disney Villain, that he became top on my list sharing rank with Vincent Price, Johnny Depp, and Alan Rickman – all 4 of these guys tying for first place as my favorite actors of all time.

    A character long condemned to the cartoon sidelines, Martin Short brought Jack Frost to life in a leading role, that surprisingly mirrored everything I had long thought Jack to be: a stuck up, sneaky, pompous, well dressed, bad guy who’ll smile, win your trust, and make you think he’s your friend only to stab you with an icicle and pelt you with frozen snowballs the moment your back is turned. Of course, being a Disney Villain, means Jack could only get just so evil, because no Disney Villain is ever allowed to be truly all evil. That’s just the way Disney Villains have to be, which of course is why it’s so easy to love a Disney Villain. And in the end, we saw our evil Jack Frost have a change of heart and a change of ways, and we watch the end of the movie and ask: Is this the end of the cold hearted Jack Frost we came to know and love? Needless to say, I did not like the end of the movie – though that didn’t stop it from becoming one of my favorite movies ever made.

    Four Wheel Drive and Hoar Frost, South Island, New Zealand





    Jack Frost vs EelKat on NaNoWriMo


    Okay, so there you have it, my observations on Jack through out history and the media. As always, I love all the interpretations of Jack, however, I am disappointed that there are remarkably few instances where Jack is not seen a children’s story book character.

    I only know of two instances when Jack Frost was seen in media NOT aimed for children or teens: Jack was once the serial killer in a slasher movie, and once Jack was found among the pages of a Harlequin romance novel as a winter love god. In both instances, the Jack portrayed could hardly be recognized as being anything other than a bad guy whose name just happened to be Jack Frost. Both the serial killer and the winter sex god, where based on Jack Frost, without really being the actual Jack Frost himself, a fact I found quite disappointing.

    And so that brings us to now, the last day of September 2009. I write. I write a lot. I write every day. Every year I compete in the National Novel Writing Month writing contest. Oddly, though I write as much as I do, and though I obsess constantly over Jack Frost, I have never written a story about him! I can not explain it. It defies all logic. Logic would seem to indicate that I should be writing Jack Frost stories left and right, and yet, here I am, a compulsive writer whose completely obsessed with Jack Frost, and whom has not a single word of prose devoted to the guy! Mr. Spock would raise an eyebrow and call it illogical and I would agree with him. I plan to correct that.

    Frozen Pond and Hoar Frost on Willow Tree, near Omakau, Hawkdun Ranges, Central Otago, New Zealand

    For this year’s NaNoWriMo, Jack Frost has been picked to be my main character. Only, my Jack is not trickster style goody-two-shoe Jack. My Jack is mean. My Jack is evil. My Jack boarders on Joker style insanity. Oh yeah, did I ever mention that the Joker is another of my obsessions? I have a lot of obsessions, you can tell.

    My Jack has been around for centuries, he’s had a long time to learn to hate, he’s had a lot of practice being mean, he’s had plenty of time to become absolutely down right evil. He also, for some odd unknown reason, seems to have been heavily influenced by Davey Jones of Pirates of the Caribbean, I guess because what with me living right on the ocean like I do, I got this thing for creepy pirates with flying ghost ships, too. You know, it looks like I may over the years, have taken all the worst out of every comic book, movie, and cartoon villain and rolled them all into one hell of a cold heart bad guy, which somehow I mixed together with all the stuff I’ve learned about Jack over the years, and in the end, Jack Frost, my Jack, seems to have become a new incantation of Jack Frost fit for manga. Oh well, so now I’ve got my theme, my plot, and my main character – now all I got to do is wait for November to get here so I can write this all down.

    Reflections and Hoar Frost, Butchers Dam, near Alexandra, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand





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    The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
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    Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
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    My inspiration comes home: Winter in Maine

    Thursday, October 1, 2009 · Leave a Comment

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    So hot sunny August quickly went by, followed just as fast by September. No, almost. Something happened this year, something rarely seen. Something that threw a plot right in my lap, complete with characters. You see, I’m a farmer in a tourist town on the North Atlantic coast. That means winter comes fast, and summer is fleeting, our growing season is short, barely a 100 days long even in our best years, and when tourists hit the beach, they hit it all at once on one of the few days that we get each year without snow.

    We start planting in May (providing the snow has melted that soon) and we hope we can get everything harvested before mid October when the first blizzard season of the winter starts. (Our “big” blizzards of February, make our much smaller four foot blizzards of October look like a dusting.) Our town has a strange meteorological phenomena caused by the extreme cold winds that blow in off the Gulf of Maine and get trapped in Saco Bay. While the rest of the Southern Maine’s growing region is listed by the weather services as zone 5, here in Old Orchard Beach, we have a zone 4 growing season most years, and a zone 3 season in the colder years. Our summers rarely reach 70F and our winters commonly dip to -20F. Wind chill factors bring our temps to -40F from December to February. It’s like somebody cut a piece out of Alaska and dropped in next door to Portland just to be funny. (Yes, mini icebergs have formed on the shores of Old Orchard Beach – it’s rare, but it has happened.) Why we get this extreme cold while the rest of Maine does not, has been explained by weather men as having something to do with the way Saco Bay is shaped. It’s shaped like a horseshoe with a very small opening, which let’s the wind in off the ocean, but than traps it there holding the cold air in, all year long.

    Farmland and Hoar Frost, Fruitlands, near Alexandra, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand

    This year, has been abnormal, even for us. In 2009 our growing season started late – it was the first week of June by the time the ground had thawed enough to plant – a result of heavy rains the fall of 2008, getting frozen deep in the ground just before a blizzard than hit us in mid October that same week. By May 2008 we still had snow well over a foot tall covering most of our garden plot. This was highly unusual, because by May first we usually have the ground tilled and planted. Our growing season lost a whole month this year.

    Usually when we have a late spring, we also have a late winter, so our growing season stays about the same. That is what we expected. Therefor, in August when I started planning my NaNoNovel, I did not plan on an early winter to take us by surprise. Second week of September 2009, after a night of Tweeting about my circus ideas, we awoke to find an alarmingly early frost had snuck in during the night and decimated our crops nearly 4 full weeks before harvest time!

    Hoar Frost and Road by Butchers Dam, near Alexandra, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand

    To make things worse, the early cold, drove fish deep into the sea to escape the cold blasts on top of the ocean – meaning not only did farmers lose their crops, but fisherman lost their hauls as well.

    To go one step farther – in mid-September our tourist season is not yet over. Palace Playland (the beach side amusement park) is still open and running, ice cream and pizza shops are still open, bikini clad tourists are still shopping, – the early cold front chased all the tourists out of Maine, forcing the rides and shops to shut down early.

    As is normal for winter in Old Orchard, shops are boarded and shuttered, buildings are empty and the few of us that stay in this cold icy town year round, are once again living in a ghost town – a full two months earlier than normal!

    And while normally I would complain at this early arrival of winter killing crops, chasing away tourist income, and driving me indoors to flee the harsh cold ocean winds – this could not have happened at a more perfect time! I had my creepy circus to write about, but no reason to write about them, no reason for them to be creepy, and more importantly, I had no characters to write about. November is fast coming upon us and I still had no clear idea what I wanted to write – and than this happens, and suddenly, riding in on an ocean breeze, everything makes perfect sense to me now – the story, the plot, where the circus came from, why they are here, what they want, and more importantly – who my main character is whom is leading my creepy circus onward: Jack Frost.

    Hoar Frost on Willow Tree, near Omakau, Central Otago, South Island, New Zealand

    Of course, weird way our seasons are, this freak frost only lasted 2 days and than our weather went back to normal for this time of year. It came just long enough to kill crops, ruin fishing, and chase away tourists, leaving our town a ghost town. Oh well. In any case, it lasted long enough to give me a plot idea.

    Find Out More About My 2009 NaNoWriMo Project

    What’s your take on this? I’d love to hear what you have to say about this post. Leave a comment and share your views!

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    Editing and Drafts
    Create a Fantasy Realm
    Advice For NaNoWriters!
    Creating Character Profiles
    Are You A Renegade A Writer?
    How To Become a Better Writer
    The Top 5 Tools For NaNoWriMo
    What Genre Is My Vampire Story?
    Where Do You Get Your Ideas?
    Improving your writing with what you read.
    Have You Written Your Author’s Interview Yet?
    How I Reached 50,000 in 30 Days and You Can Too!
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