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NaNoWriMo RE: I’ve Killed One of My Characters!

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I’ve Killed One of My Characters!


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I’ve Killed One of My Characters!

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Oct 2, 2010 – 17 46
When I wrote my first novel, one of the best feelings I had was when I killed a character. I went on a rampage so bad that I had to go back and UNKILL some of the characters I killed off. See, I forgot that I needed some of them later on in the plot! LOL
So, tell who you killed and how and maybe a why if you know a reason. Now… get busy and kill some peeps! Play god!
~~~c[]xxx[];:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:> jade
———-

One? Are you kidding me? I’ll be lucky if I have one left alive by the time I reach the end! I’ve got 3 serial killers and a whack job psycho doctor, all in the same house with a schizophranic madman who is killing people and blaming his house, and every sex crazed screaming blond bimbo *cough* I mean teenage girl*cough* within 3 a city radius vanishing without a trace – it’s a non stop splatterpunk slasher gorn bloodbath in a house of death gone more bizerck than Robert Englund ever could. Killing just one of my characters *sheesh* I can’t even count the dead the bodies are stacked so high!

The way things are going now, I’ll have only the doc, the madman, and the 3 serial killers (no wait 2, I forgot – I kill one of them too – but he gets to come back as a ghost in another book I already wrote – this one is a prequel), left alive at the end. No, no one ever escapes my Twighlight Manor, there are no happy endings, no heroes getting out at the last minute…I mean, what good is a haunted house that lets people live to tell the tale? People wouldn’t keep trying to get inside and solve the mystery of why no one ever comes out, if anyone ever came out, now would they? Would you go in an apparent abandoned house if you knew cannibals lived there and were waiting to eat you as soon as you walked inside? *sheesh* We can’t have no survivors. How else could I have kept this going for over 30 volumes?

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>NaNoWriMo RE: I’ve Killed One of My Characters!

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I’ve Killed One of My Characters!


jadedragonGlowing Halo
I’ve Killed One of My Characters!

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Official Participant
Joined: Jun 25, 2008
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
Posts: 135
Posted on:
Oct 2, 2010 – 17 46
When I wrote my first novel, one of the best feelings I had was when I killed a character. I went on a rampage so bad that I had to go back and UNKILL some of the characters I killed off. See, I forgot that I needed some of them later on in the plot! LOL
So, tell who you killed and how and maybe a why if you know a reason. Now… get busy and kill some peeps! Play god!
~~~c[]xxx[];:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:;:> jade
———-

One? Are you kidding me? I’ll be lucky if I have one left alive by the time I reach the end! I’ve got 3 serial killers and a whack job psycho doctor, all in the same house with a schizophranic madman who is killing people and blaming his house, and every sex crazed screaming blond bimbo *cough* I mean teenage girl*cough* within 3 a city radius vanishing without a trace – it’s a non stop splatterpunk slasher gorn bloodbath in a house of death gone more bizerck than Robert Englund ever could. Killing just one of my characters *sheesh* I can’t even count the dead the bodies are stacked so high!

The way things are going now, I’ll have only the doc, the madman, and the 3 serial killers (no wait 2, I forgot – I kill one of them too – but he gets to come back as a ghost in another book I already wrote – this one is a prequel), left alive at the end. No, no one ever escapes my Twighlight Manor, there are no happy endings, no heroes getting out at the last minute…I mean, what good is a haunted house that lets people live to tell the tale? People wouldn’t keep trying to get inside and solve the mystery of why no one ever comes out, if anyone ever came out, now would they? Would you go in an apparent abandoned house if you knew cannibals lived there and were waiting to eat you as soon as you walked inside? *sheesh* We can’t have no survivors. How else could I have kept this going for over 30 volumes?

Need help with NaNoWriMo?
Check out these:
The 13 Step Method
The Top 5 NaNoWriMo Tools
Creating Character Profiles
Voodoo Dolls for Writers
Those super soft extra fluffy scarfs I wear to Write-Ins

Want to network with me?
http://www.keen.com/EelKat
http://twitter.com/EelKat
http://www.facebook.com/EelKat
http://eknano.blogspot.com
http://eelkat.wordpress.com
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/132659
http://www.scriptfrenzy.org/user/132659

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NaNoWriMo RE: Splatterpunk and gore, tips appreciated.

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Splatterpunk and gore, tips appreciated.

 

writersbane
Splatterpunk and gorn, tips appreciated.

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Oct 18, 2010 – 18 05
I love horror, but I have never actually written my favorite kind of horror. Splatterpunk, or basically…. extremely graphic gore and horror, is something I am having some trouble writing.

I know what I can read for examples, I have Poppy Z Brite and Jack Ketchum novels, I’ve played Saya no Uta, and I watch horror movies like they are needed for breathing. But I still can’t seem to WORD it right.

Anyone experiences in writing this kind of horror, can you give me a few tips?

Funny…I always hear people saying how hard it is to write, but blood and guts are the easiest part of writing for me. I just write what I know. I write what I see.

(When I was 14, I was the lone survivor of a bloodbath murder that left my 5 best friends chopped up all over my back yard, so, when I say I write what I know, I write what I see…yeah…before than I never wrote death or murder and after than I have a hard time NOT writing death and murder…so maybe that’s why I can do it so well. Maybe it’s only easy to write after you’ve seen it first hand.)

But, once you know what some one’s pink and purple (not red) insides look like, or the way their half digested breakfast rolls out of their intestines once they are split open, or the surprising fact that blood does not actually splatter but rather pulsates into pools on the ground, how their eyes turn totally black seconds after death, or how a popped out eye is not a “white ball” but rather looks like a glob of grape jelly… yeah it’s pretty easy to write what you see rather than try to imagine what it might look like. Believe me, the real thing is far more disturbing than what they show in the movies.

Advice? Go to a college book store and find surgical books – the type that have step by step photos of surgery and autopsies to teach surgeons…and study those photos. There are websites that post crime scene photos, car accidents, murders, etc, find them, study those photos and read the reports… You’ll have a hard time writing splatter punk if you don’t know how the body suffers under intense trauma. But once you know what happens, and the difference between what movies tell you happens and what actually happens…just write what you see. Describe it as you see it. That’s all you need to do.

You want to shock the reader – get into the head of the person who discovers the body. Write it how they see it, write it how they smell it…know that the smell of a dead body even a few seconds after death is far from pleasant – piss, shit, blood, bile, vomit, and a rancid putrid smell that nauseates.

Need help with NaNoWriMo?
Check out these:
The 13 Step Method
The Top 5 NaNoWriMo Tools
Creating Character Profiles
Voodoo Dolls for Writers
Those super soft extra fluffy scarfs I wear to Write-Ins

Want to network with me?
http://www.keen.com/EelKat
http://twitter.com/EelKat
http://www.facebook.com/EelKat
http://eknano.blogspot.com
http://eelkat.wordpress.com
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/132659
http://www.scriptfrenzy.org/user/132659

This blog is part of:

>NaNoWriMo RE: Splatterpunk and gore, tips appreciated.

> black birdfall leaves centerblack bird

Splatterpunk and gore, tips appreciated.

 

writersbane
Splatterpunk and gorn, tips appreciated.

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Official Participant
Joined: Dec 21, 2007
Location: Salisbury, MD
Posts: 15
Posted on:
Oct 18, 2010 – 18 05
I love horror, but I have never actually written my favorite kind of horror. Splatterpunk, or basically…. extremely graphic gore and horror, is something I am having some trouble writing.

I know what I can read for examples, I have Poppy Z Brite and Jack Ketchum novels, I’ve played Saya no Uta, and I watch horror movies like they are needed for breathing. But I still can’t seem to WORD it right.

Anyone experiences in writing this kind of horror, can you give me a few tips?

Funny…I always hear people saying how hard it is to write, but blood and guts are the easiest part of writing for me. I just write what I know. I write what I see.

(When I was 14, I was the lone survivor of a bloodbath murder that left my 5 best friends chopped up all over my back yard, so, when I say I write what I know, I write what I see…yeah…before than I never wrote death or murder and after than I have a hard time NOT writing death and murder…so maybe that’s why I can do it so well. Maybe it’s only easy to write after you’ve seen it first hand.)

But, once you know what some one’s pink and purple (not red) insides look like, or the way their half digested breakfast rolls out of their intestines once they are split open, or the surprising fact that blood does not actually splatter but rather pulsates into pools on the ground, how their eyes turn totally black seconds after death, or how a popped out eye is not a “white ball” but rather looks like a glob of grape jelly… yeah it’s pretty easy to write what you see rather than try to imagine what it might look like. Believe me, the real thing is far more disturbing than what they show in the movies.

Advice? Go to a college book store and find surgical books – the type that have step by step photos of surgery and autopsies to teach surgeons…and study those photos. There are websites that post crime scene photos, car accidents, murders, etc, find them, study those photos and read the reports… You’ll have a hard time writing splatter punk if you don’t know how the body suffers under intense trauma. But once you know what happens, and the difference between what movies tell you happens and what actually happens…just write what you see. Describe it as you see it. That’s all you need to do.

You want to shock the reader – get into the head of the person who discovers the body. Write it how they see it, write it how they smell it…know that the smell of a dead body even a few seconds after death is far from pleasant – piss, shit, blood, bile, vomit, and a rancid putrid smell that nauseates.

Need help with NaNoWriMo?
Check out these:
The 13 Step Method
The Top 5 NaNoWriMo Tools
Creating Character Profiles
Voodoo Dolls for Writers
Those super soft extra fluffy scarfs I wear to Write-Ins

Want to network with me?
http://www.keen.com/EelKat
http://twitter.com/EelKat
http://www.facebook.com/EelKat
http://eknano.blogspot.com
http://eelkat.wordpress.com
http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/132659
http://www.scriptfrenzy.org/user/132659

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